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In this contemparary era,the effect of advertising is done only for marketing purpose.Moreover,it does not exhibit on the productivity of product or on the review of customer. I totally agree with this idea.

In this contemparary era, the effect of advertising is done only for marketing purpose. Moreover, it does not exhibit on the productivity of product or on the review of customer. I totally agree with this idea. jV6DN
In this contemporary era, the effect of advertising is done only for marketing purposes. Moreover, it does not exhibit the productivity of the product or the review of the customer. I agree with this idea. Advertising agencies have a profound effect on the business, these corporations are concerned about promoting the product through media to gain profit. However, layman gets exposed to these promotions when they are using mass media, the internet, and newspapers. On the other hand, people inevitably come across these advertisements as they keep on popping up in daily newspapers, the internet, or while watching a tv show. It subconsciously affects the thought process of consumers and they direct their decisions based on these advertising promotions. Furthermore, the youth gets captivated with the buzzy trend and tries to imitate the entertainment celebrities' footsteps. They do try to influence the younger generation in buying non-essential products. Even though stars from industries are in contrast to normal people, they have a great impact on society's desires. Therefore, consumers try to buy commodities based on their favorite actor or actress-promoted products rather than the proper ones. Owing to the fact, these goods are sold on a high margin. I solemnly believe that the high sale of these famous commodities have an intense effect on ad's and not the need of society.
In this contemporary era, the effect of advertising
is done
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only
for marketing purposes.
Moreover
, it does not exhibit the productivity of the
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product
or the review of the customer. I
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agree
with this
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idea
.

Advertising agencies have a profound effect on the business, these corporations
are concerned
about promoting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
through media to gain profit.
However
, layman
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
exposed to these promotions when they are using mass media, the internet, and newspapers.
On the other hand
,
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people
inevitably
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
across these advertisements as they
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keep
on popping up in daily newspapers, the internet, or while watching a
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tv
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show
. It
subconsciously
affects the
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thought
process of
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consumers and
they direct their decisions based on these advertising promotions.

Furthermore
, the youth
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
captivated with the
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buzzy
trend and tries to imitate the entertainment celebrities' footsteps. They do try to influence the younger generation in buying non-essential
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
.
Even though
stars from industries are
in contrast
to normal
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, they have a great impact on society's desires.
Therefore
, consumers try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
commodities based on their favorite actor or actress-promoted
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
rather
than the proper ones. Owing to the fact, these
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
are sold
on a high margin.

I
solemnly
believe that the high sale of these
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
commodities have an intense effect on ad's and not the need of society.
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IELTS essay In this contemparary era, the effect of advertising is done only for marketing purpose. Moreover, it does not exhibit on the productivity of product or on the review of customer. I totally agree with this idea.

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