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Some people say that computers have made life more difficult and complicated. Others think that computers make our lives better, easier, safer and less troublesome

Some people say that computers have made life more difficult and complicated. Others think that computers make our lives better, easier, safer and less troublesome o2jg
Although there are many people who believe that invention of computers has made our life trouble free, there are people who believe it has made life troublesome and cumbersome. This essay discusses about both of these viewpoints in detail in below paragraphs Computer has made data logging and data searching easier. To explain, many big firms nowadays use computers to save there important data such as billings, employee salaries and stock related data.
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who believe that invention of computers has made our life trouble free, there are
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who believe it has made life troublesome and cumbersome. This essay
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Computer has made
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logging and
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searching easier. To
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explain
,
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many
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big
firms nowadays
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computers to save there
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important
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data
such as billings, employee salaries and stock related
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IELTS essay Some people say that computers have made life more difficult and complicated. Others think that computers make our lives better, easier, safer and less troublesome

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
73 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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