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some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex stressful. What is your opinion? use spesific reasons and examples to support your answers.

some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex stressful. What is your opinion? use spesific reasons and examples to support your answers. l9QD

Computer has been invented by a person long time ago. The computer is the one of electronic stuffs that useful for our life. The employees in 80’s-90’s used the computer to work in their office. The shape was bigger than the computers nowadays. The computers also helped the employee to complete and finish their job. Meanwhile, i write this letter with a laptop. I think laptop is the refult of modifying the computer. Laptop is a simple shape from computer, you can bring it everywhere you want. All you need is recharge the battery to turn it on. As we know that computer give many impacts to our life. Helping other people job, find many sources that you want in the internet to accomplish your tasks and many benefits come from it. We can also conclude that, computer bring changes in many ways. You can arrange your file in your folder so you don’t have to worry where do you save the file in your computer. The computer is the next step of the future. A lot of people keep develope their idea to modify this computer/laptop to look ‘more future’. In the contrast side, we can also see the bad impact from it. It is a common known that some people get addict with gadget stuffs, like laptop or computer. Some people will be stressful if they don’t understand how to use those things. And they will blow up their anger and destroy it then burn it. It is also not good for children because it will harm them and give the bad impact. As parents, if you want to buy your children a brand new gadget, you have to watch them. Children nowadays have a lot of inspirations and they can cross the line. If they cross the line, they will be tracked by a horrible stranger person. I suggest you to pursuade your child to give him/her books. Book is not less competitive than gadget too. Books also have power as same as computer. Unfortunately, not many people intend to read a book.

Computer has been invented
 by a person long time ago. The computer is the one of electronic stuffs that useful for our life. The employees in 80’s-90’s This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 the computer to work in their office. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 shape was bigger than the computers nowadays. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 computers also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 the employee to complete and finish their job. Meanwhile, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 write this letter with a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 is the Possible spelling mistake found.resultref ult
refult
 of modifying the computer. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
Laptop
 is a simple shape from computer, you can bring it everywhere you want. All you need is recharge the battery to turn it on.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 we know that computer give This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 impacts to our life. Helping other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 job, find This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 sources that you want The usual collocation for technology is "on," not "in." It is better to say this: "on the internet".on the internet
in the internet
 to accomplish your tasks and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 benefits This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 from it. We can also
 conclude that, computer bring This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 ways. You can arrange your file in your folder This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you don’t This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 worry where do you save the file in your computer. The computer is the next
 step of the future. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
A lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
Possible spelling mistake found.developeddevelopdeveloperdevelopsdevelop edéveloppé
develope
 their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 to modify this computer/laptop to look ‘more future’.

In the contrast side, we can also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 impact from it. It is a common known that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 addict with gadget stuffs, like You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 or computer. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 will be stressful if they don’t understand how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 those things. And they will blow up their anger and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishruin
destroy
 it then burn it. It is also
 not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for children This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it will harm them and give the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 impact.

As parents, if you want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 your children a 'brand new' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "brand-new".brand-new
brand new
 gadget, you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 them. Children nowadays have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).inspirations, and
inspirations and
 they can cross the line. If they cross the line, they will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
tracked
 by a horrible stranger person. I suggest you to Possible spelling mistake found.persuade
pursuade
 your child to give him/her You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
Book
 is not less competitive than gadget too. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
Books
also
 have power as same as computer. Unfortunately, not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 intend to read a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
book
. 