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some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it discuss both views and give your own opinion

The debat over ads effects on cutomers choices is somehow controvercial due to the various viewpoints each party holds. The question of "to what extent media impact resident's mind" is exceptionally important. As to whether it would be better to consume our money stock, or to just focus on wasted time when follow these materials. This essay will look at both sides and give examples from the United States and Sweden. Firstly, recent research stated that the majority of the individuals being attractive to any stuff that they seen before on TV or Youtube for example. In addition, The Food and Drug Administration (FDA) has been attributed the dramatic surge in weight for the USA's population for the advertisments. This is becuase the large amount of adverse following for the seduction that the owners of these foodstuffs make when they produce ads. Secondly, many people stated that they don't have any sense of swaying when it comes to choose a speciefic good from the store. Take Sweden, for instance, where the streets is almost fully with many ads but the trade of all products is balanced as the Sweden cabinet said. In conclusion, I srongly believe that the media and its ads has a significant impact that result in follow or purchase objects. On the other hand, the citizen should build his opinion to buy goods based on the quality not just concentrate on the appearance.
The
debat
over ads effects on
cutomers
choices is somehow
controvercial
due to the various viewpoints each party holds. The question of
"
to what extent media impact resident's mind
"
is
exceptionally
important
.
As to whether
it would be better to consume our money stock, or to
just
focus on wasted time when follow these materials. This essay will look at both sides and give examples from the United States and Sweden.

Firstly
, recent research stated that the majority of the individuals being attractive to any stuff that they
seen
before
on TV or
Youtube
for example
.
In addition
, The Food and Drug Administration (FDA) has
been attributed
the dramatic surge in weight for the USA's population for the
advertisments
. This is
becuase
the large amount of adverse following for the seduction that the owners of these foodstuffs
make
when they produce ads.

Secondly
,
many
people
stated that they don't have any sense of swaying when it
comes
to choose a
speciefic
good
from the store. Take Sweden,
for instance
, where the streets
is
almost
fully
with
many
ads
but
the trade of all products
is balanced
as the Sweden cabinet said.

In conclusion
, I
srongly
believe that the media and its ads has a significant impact that result in follow or
purchase
objects.
On the other hand
, the citizen should build his opinion to
buy
goods
based on the quality not
just
concentrate on the appearance.
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IELTS essay some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it discuss both views and give your own opinion

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