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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. K7Ak
Advertising is considered as one of the powerful tools for promotion and selling of products or services. Advert is inevitable for new as well as existing company. A number of individual advocate that advertisement motivate individual to purchase products while other people argue that masses do not give attention to it. This essay will disucuss both the views and say why I believe it is necessary for customer. To embark upon, a lot of consumer buy products based on the advertisement what they view on television or any other platform, and numerous customer are allured towards advertisement. Majority of company do advertise through online platform such as websit, and buyer cannot escape for such promotion, which is continuously pop on their screen. As a result, purchaser are forced to click such sites and at the end they are attracted towards those products and compel to buy. On the other hand, advertising play significant role in providing information on new products available in the market. For instance, endorsement of products by renowned artists such as actor, player, and singer make common people believe that they are worthbuying, so they buy such products. In the contrary, some individual believe that advertisement are worthless, and they do not believe on them. Moreover, advertisement has little truth and lot of false. They think that advertisement can be impulsive buying, in other word it creates unnecessary demands and consumer are forced to buy the products. However, Individual purchase product based on the requirement, they are well informed about the product available in the market and they do not require any sort of knowledge about the products that is displayed on various advertisement platform. In conclusion, advertisement persuade individual buyer to select best product available in them market, and make aware from the fraud products.
Advertising
is considered
as one of the powerful tools for promotion and selling of
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products
or services. Advert is inevitable for new
as well
as existing
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company
. A number of
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individual
advocate that
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advertisement
motivate
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individual
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
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products
while
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other
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people
argue that masses do not give attention to it. This essay will
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disucuss
both the views and say why I
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believe
it is necessary for customer.

To embark upon,
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a lot of
consumer
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buy
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products
based on the
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advertisement
what they view on television or any
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other
platform, and numerous customer
are allured
towards
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advertisement
. Majority of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
do advertise through online platform such as
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websit
, and buyer cannot escape for such promotion, which is
continuously
pop on their screen.
As a result
, purchaser
are forced
to click such sites and at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
they
are attracted
towards those
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products
and compel to
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buy
. On the
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other
hand, advertising play significant role in providing information on new
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products
available in the market.
For instance
, endorsement of
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products
by renowned artists such as actor, player, and singer
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
common
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
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believe
that they are
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worthbuying
,
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so
they
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buy
such products.

In the contrary,
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some
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individual
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believe
that
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advertisement
are worthless, and they do not
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believe
on them.
Moreover
,
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advertisement
has
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little
truth and
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lot of
false. They
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think
that
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advertisement
can be impulsive buying, in
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other
word it creates unnecessary demands and consumer
are forced
to
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buy
the
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products
.
However
,
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Individual
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
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product
based on the requirement, they are
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well informed
about the
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product
available in the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
market and
they do not require any sort of knowledge about the
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products
that
is displayed
on various
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advertisement
platform.

In conclusion
,
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advertisement
persuade
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individual
buyer to select best
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product
available in them market, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
aware from the fraud
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
.
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IELTS essay Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

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