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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? O87d

I strongly believe that advertisements improve the quality of a mans life. With the growing technology, there are many products that are available in the market which makes our life simple by reducing our work. For each and every product, starting from a simple tooth brush, we have numerous brands in the market which are spaced at different price ranges and specifications. Advertisements helps us in viewing and analysing the specifications and prices including the drawbacks for all the available options. These days, we also have the reviews being posted below the advertisements with pros and cons of the product which is really helpful. I do agree that at times it may be annoying when your inbox is filled with advertisements or when an advertisement pops up on your laptop screen in the middle of something very important. But, if one does not know the products that are available in the market, then they would not know the best suited product that ticks all of their requirements. Lack of knowledge may in fact end up in spending more money for an unworthy product. Advertisements are meant only to promote their products and not compile or force any individual to buy them. It is sole decision of an individual whether or not to buy a product. I am an individual who likes to make small notes or marks in a book while reading. These days, use of books has become very less and most of the information is transferred electronically. I really missed the joy of reading and was lost but then through advertisements, I came across laptops with active stylus which allows us to draw, make notes, and do everything in similar way I used to when I read in books. This really brought my joy of reading back and this would definitely would have not happened it there was no medium to promote such new products. Remember, technology or internet is a double edged sword.

I strongly
 believe that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisements
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the quality of a 'mans' refers to the verb 'man' meaning take command of something. Did you mean "men" or "man's"?menman's
mans
 life.

With the growing technology, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 that are available in the market which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 our life simple by reducing our work. For each and every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
, starting from a simple tooth brush, we have numerous brands in the market which are spaced
 at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 price ranges and specifications. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
Advertisements
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 us in viewing and Possible spelling mistake. 'analysing' is British English.analyzing
analysing
 the specifications and prices including the drawbacks for all the available options. These days, we also
 have the reviews being posted
 below the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisements
 with pros and cons of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 which is really
 helpful.

I do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that at times it may be annoying when your inbox is filled
 with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisements
 or when an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisement
 pops up on your laptop screen in the middle of something This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, if one does not know the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 that are available in the market, then they would not know the best suited You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 that ticks all of their requirements. Lack of knowledge may in fact This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up in spending more money for an unworthy product.

Advertisements are meant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 to promote their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 and not compile or force any individual to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 them. It is sole decision of an individual Consider shortening this phrase to just "whether". It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.whether
whether or not
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a product.

I am an individual who likes to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 notes or marks in a book while reading. These days, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of books has become This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 less and most of the information is transferred
electronically
. I really
 missed the joy of reading and was lost
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 then through You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisements
, I came across laptops with active stylus which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorizes
allows
 us to draw, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 notes, and do everything in similar way I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to when I read in books. This really
 brought my joy of reading back and this would definitely This form is ambiguous and can be used as past tense. Confirm that you are using the intended base form of the main verb after 'to do' as an auxiliary verb..
would
 have not happened it there was no medium to promote such new products.

Remember, technology or internet is a This word is normally spelled with hyphen.double-edged
double edged
 sword. 