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Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. AK9N
The number of movie realses was 2000. Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
The number of movie
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Some
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believe that there should be a
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fixed
punishment for each type of
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crime
. Others,
however
, argue that the circumstances of an individual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
, and the motivation for committing it, should always
be taken
into account when deciding on the punishment.

Discuss both sides and give your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
opinion.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
believe that there should be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
punishment for each type of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
. Others,
however
, argue that the circumstances of an individual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
, and the motivation for committing it, should always
be taken
into account when deciding on the punishment.

Discuss both sides and give your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
opinion.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.

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