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some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. what is your opinion about this? v.9

some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. what is your opinion about this? v. 9
In the current era, how a person manages his home and workplace can make a positive impact on his life. There are some people who think that it is imperative to keep home and workplace tidy, because it can make life a lot easier. In my opinion, I agree with this fact due to the reasons that this contributes in saving people's times and helps them keep things organized. To begin with, managing time is one of the most complicated tasks in everyone's life, because people don't know what to do at a certain time period due to lack of management skills. They have scattered their things all over the place that makes the task of finding a specific thing very challenging. For instance, when I was studying in a university, I was always looking for my assignments that I needed to submit urgently, which wasted lots of my time. As a result, I was late to attend my classes, which caused by the marked reduction of my course due to late submission. That is why, it is necessary to organize everything beforehand, otherwise it can adversely affect someone's future. On the other hand, it is a well-known notion that an organization is a key to success and to gain prosperity, because if a person is organized then he finishes tasks much faster than an un-organized person. From a workforce point of view, it is very critical that employees keep themselves organized in order to deliver the assigned tasks on time. However, an organization does not merely help to save time, but it also reduces the stress, which is a very common problem with some people who are always trying to find some important documents and couldn't find on time, as a result, late for their meetings. This causes negative effects on peoples careers as well as various health issues including depression. In a nutshell, there is no doubt that great management and organization can make a positive difference in people's life. Most importantly in this competitive world, people should pay more attention to their organization skills, so that, they are well-prepared for the days ahead.
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because
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make
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a lot easier. In my opinion, I
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agree
with this fact due to the reasons that this contributes in saving
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people
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times
and
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helps
them
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keep
things organized.

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with, managing
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time
is one of the most complicated
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tasks
in everyone's
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life
,
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because
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people
don't know what to do at a certain
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time
period due to lack of management
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skills
. They have scattered their things all over the place that
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makes
the
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task
of finding a specific thing
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very
challenging.
For instance
, when I was studying in a university, I was always looking for my assignments that I needed to submit
urgently
, which wasted lots of my
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time
.
As a result
, I was late to attend my classes, which caused by the marked reduction of my course due to late submission.
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why, it is necessary to organize everything beforehand,
otherwise
it can
adversely
affect someone's future.

On the other hand
, it is a well-known notion that an
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organization
is a key to success and to gain prosperity,
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because
if a person
is organized
then he finishes
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tasks
much faster than an
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un-organized
person. From a workforce point of view, it is
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critical that employees
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keep
themselves organized in order to deliver the assigned
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tasks
on
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time
.
However
, an
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organization
does not
merely
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help
to save
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time
,
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it
also
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reduces
the
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stress
, which is a
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very
common problem with
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some
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people
who are always trying to find
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some
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important
documents and couldn't find on
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time
,
as a result
, late for their meetings. This causes
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negative
effects on
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peoples
careers
as well
as various health issues including depression.

In a nutshell, there is no doubt that great management and
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organization
can
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make
a
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positive
difference in
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people
's
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life
. Most
importantly
in this competitive world,
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people
should pay more attention to their
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organization
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skills
,
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so
that, they are well-prepared for the days ahead.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. what is your opinion about this? v. 9

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
356 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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