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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? yX7dP
Most people spend around 80% of the time at home or workplace during weekdays and at-least 50% of time at home on weekends. Some people feel that it is essential to keep home and workplace tidy with everything kept at right place, while, some argue that this is not as important. However, I strongly agree with former viewpoint and believe that tidiness can save time and make home and workplace presentable. Admittedly, keeping our home and workplace organized can save us a lot of time when we are looking for some items like scissors, pens, papers etc. We know the correct place for these items and quickly grab them in no minutes. As a kid, I never used to keep objects at right places and then used to spend hours searching for them, It takes minimum effort to place the object in an orderly manner, be it home or workplace, however, it can save hours of searching spree. Moreover, keeping home and workplace well organised make them presentable to guests or colleagues who visit us. It gives a good impression of ourselves as being well organized, non-chaotic and, a responsible human being. A disorganized and dirty place is generally frowned upon. In office, when your manager visits you and asks for some papers and you start a frantic search all over, it gives wrong impression and the boss might think you are not right for the job. Similarly, when friends and family visit you at home and items are lying around on ground in an untidy home, it sets a bad example and they might not want to visit you again. In summary, I would concede that it is very important to clean our home and workplace so that they are always welcoming and save our own time.
Most
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spend around 80% of the
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at home or
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workplace
during weekdays and at-least 50% of
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time
at home on weekends.
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people
feel that it is essential to
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keep
home and
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workplace
tidy with everything
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kept
at right
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place
, while,
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some
argue that this is not as
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important
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, I
strongly
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agree
with former viewpoint and believe that tidiness can
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save
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time
and
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make
home and
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workplace
presentable.

Admittedly
, keeping our home and
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workplace
organized can
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save
us
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a lot of
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time
when we are looking for
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some
items like scissors, pens, papers etc. We know the correct
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place
for these items and
quickly
grab them in no minutes. As a kid, I never
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used
to
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objects at right
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places
and then
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used
to spend hours searching for them, It takes minimum effort to
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place
the object
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in an orderly manner
, be it home or
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workplace
,
however
, it can
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save
hours of searching spree.

Moreover
, keeping home and
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workplace
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well organised
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make
them presentable to guests or colleagues who
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visit
us. It gives a
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good
impression of ourselves as being well organized, non-chaotic and, a responsible human being. A disorganized and dirty
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place
is
generally
frowned upon. In office, when your manager
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visits
you and
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asks for
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some
papers and you
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start
a frantic search all over, it gives
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wrong
impression and the boss might
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you are not right for the job.
Similarly
, when friends and family
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visit
you at home and items are lying around on ground in an untidy home, it sets a
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bad
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they might not want to
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visit
you again.

In summary, I would concede that it is
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very
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important
to clean our home and
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workplace
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so
that they are always welcoming and
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save
our
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own
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time
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IELTS essay Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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