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Some people say Historyh is one the most important school subjects. Others think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History

Some people say Historyh is one the most important school subjects. Others think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History 3dlN

Schools are considered as the starting point in educating and inspiring the minds of the next generation to push the boundaries of human intelligence. Some believe that history is one among the most essential subjects in school. Others argue that science and technology are more significant than history. This essay will discuss both about both opinions. On one hand, history can be considered as a path to learn from the pas, it also paves way to embrace these ideas to solve modern problems. For instance, scientists try to learn about weather patterns and climate change by examining the events occured in the past. These patterns

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IELTS essay Some people say Historyh is one the most important school subjects. Others think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

104 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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