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The government should stop spending money on restoration of old buildings. Instead, it should build more houses and improve roads. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The government should stop spending money on restoration of old buildings. Instead, it should build more houses and improve roads. RJEk
Aged constructions such as forts, monuments, etc. describe the ancient history of any country, from which we get abundant knowledge of the historical culture of our ancestors by visiting such historical places. It has been argued that the government should restrict the use of money spent on the renovation of obsolete structures in the country, taking into account the provision of other houses and road repairs. With this in mind, I would like to agree to some extent that the authority should spend on the construction of new houses and the improvement of roads, etc. , the importance of the mature heritage should not be denied. First, there are numerous benefits of rebuilding roads and building more homes that can add to a country's economic growth. In today's fast-paced life, the means of transportation in enormous cities are increasing drastically. The environment is being badly affected and polluted due to increased traffic, which has led to the onset of numerous deadly diseases such as heart attack, lung cancer, etc. Because of this, the citizens are moving out of the vast cities and living in the suburbs. For example, according to the survey, the population of Delhi, the capital of India, has crossed two crores. Due to this, the traffic has also reached its peak and people have had to leave their homes to live in areas outside Delhi. To get rid of such problems, the regime ought to set up new houses and colonies. Also, the deteriorating condition of the roads is due to the increased traffic resources, and the government needs to repair the roads on time to control them. However, the ancient buildings and monuments, etc has its own importance. These old and historic structures provide a high level of strength to the economy of the country. For example, a country with diverse cultures like India, where Monuments like the “ Himanyu Tomb” and ancient buildings like the “Taj Mahal” are known for their antique construction, attract people from all over the world to visit and enjoy the heritage of the country and results in the economic growth in the country. In conclusion, while the benefits of rebuilding roads and building new homes can be seen on a priority basis, we must never forget our ancient culture and heritage.
Aged constructions such as forts, monuments, etc.
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describe
the
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ancient
history of any
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country
, from which we
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get
abundant knowledge of the historical culture of our ancestors by visiting such historical places. It has
been argued
that the
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government
should restrict the
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use
of money spent on the renovation of obsolete structures in the
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country
, taking into account the provision of other
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houses
and
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road
repairs. With this in mind, I would like to
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agree
to
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some
extent that the authority should spend on the construction of new
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houses
and the improvement of
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roads
, etc.
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,
the importance of the mature heritage should not
be denied
.

First
, there are numerous benefits of rebuilding
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roads
and
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building
more homes that can
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add
to a country's economic growth. In
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today
's
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fast
-paced life, the means of transportation in enormous cities are increasing
drastically
. The environment is being
badly
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affected
and polluted due to increased traffic, which has led to the onset of numerous deadly diseases such as heart attack, lung cancer, etc.
Because of this
, the citizens are moving out of the vast cities and living in the suburbs.
For example
, according to the survey, the population of Delhi, the capital of India, has crossed two crores. Due to this, the traffic has
also
reached its peak and
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people
have had to
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leave
their homes to
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live
in areas outside Delhi. To
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get
rid of such problems, the regime ought to set up new
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houses
and colonies.
Also
, the deteriorating condition of the
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roads
is due to the increased traffic resources, and the
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government
needs to repair the
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roads
on time to control them.

However
, the
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ancient
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buildings
and monuments, etc has its
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own
importance. These
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old
and historic structures provide a high level of strength to the economy of the
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country
.
For example
, a
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country
with diverse cultures like India, where Monuments like the
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“
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Himanyu
Tomb” and
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ancient
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buildings
like the “Taj Mahal”
are known
for their antique construction, attract
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people
from all over the world to visit and enjoy the heritage of the
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country
and results in the economic growth in the country.

In conclusion
, while the benefits of rebuilding
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roads
and
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building
new homes can be
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seen
on a priority basis, we
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must
never forget our
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ancient
culture and heritage.
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IELTS essay The government should stop spending money on restoration of old buildings. Instead, it should build more houses and improve roads.

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