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Some people prefer to travel alone. Others like to travel in groups. Which do you think is the best way to travel?

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Nowadays, traveling is an extremely enjoyable activity. Some people prefer to travel alone others prefer to travel in groups. My preference is solo traveling because of several reasons. Firstly, traveling alone is more adventurous and amusing. In process of traveling you get to know other people’s cultures a. Also, in solo traveling, you are freer and you don’t have to discipline how to get along with friends. Statistics held in France show, that 61% of people prefer to travel alone. I always try to travel alone, because you also have more time to think about yourself and thinking of changing something fundamental in your life. secondly, solo travel is the best way of getting new friends, this is one of the biggest advantages of it. When I visit foreign countries, I always come back with numerous friends, with I still keep in touch.
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to travel alone. Others like to travel in groups. Which do you think is the best way to travel?

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