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Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. aDxP
Today, many people like living in large cities. However there also some who prefer to live in little towns. As for me, I would like to point that living in a metrapolis is far better and the following essay will illustrate some reasons for it. To begin with, I believe that there are many facilities in big cities that enable you to lead a luxury lifestyle. In other words, there is available everything that is appropriate for your requirements and needs. For instance, there are well-developed medical services, modern academic institutions, electronic libraries, diverse exciting places for amusement and definitely multi-storey houses for living. All of them provide you a great opportunity to have high-standard living whereas in villages these are unimaginitive.
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with, I believe that there are
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many
facilities in
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cities that enable you to lead a luxury lifestyle.
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, there is available everything
that is
appropriate for your requirements and needs.
For instance
, there are well-developed medical services, modern academic institutions, electronic libraries, diverse exciting places for amusement and definitely
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multi-storey
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. All of them provide you a great opportunity to have high-standard
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whereas in villages these are
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unimaginitive
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
122 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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