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Some people prefer to help by making Donations to Local Charities while some prefer to Donate to National & International Organizations. Discuss both measures and give your opinion

Some people prefer to help by making Donations to Local Charities while some prefer to Donate to National & International Organizations. Discuss both measures and give your opinion ErPq

Helping others is important. Some individuals go to local charities and helps directly to needy people. Some of them donate to national and international organizations. There are advantages for both approaches If we are directly in touch with the needy then there are no chances of corruption or misusing the money for other purposes. Helping people around us and giving them a better life is essential. First, we need to think about our society before nation.

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 individuals go to local charities and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
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Some
 of them donate to national and international organizations. There are advantages for both approaches

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 in touch with the needy then there are no chances of corruption or misusing the money for other purposes. Helping This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 around us and giving them a better life is essential. First
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