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Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home.

Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. 0Mw3q
Man, through the ages, has undergone many changes from the time when he had to hunt for food to these das when he has to buy it. Some people prefer to buy fresh vegetables, meat, and fruits and prepare food at home. However, other people prefer to skip that step with cooking and have dinner at a restaurant. I think that both of these choices have some advantages and disadvantages. Below, I will give some reasons to support my answer. Personally, I do not like fast food. So, my choice is always between a restaurant and my home. First, I would like to say that cooking is a great tradition. It helps people to relax, reflect on some pleasant moments while peeling or cutting the vegetables. It is a means of eliminating one’s stress and tension. Secondly, sometimes I do not want to have something too complicated for my dinner. I just want to have light food like a salad and glass of milk. So, one of the reasons why I like to eat at home is because I can have what I want at this moment. One greater thing about eating at home is that I can sit in front of the TV and watch an interesting program or a movie. Finally, having dinner at home allows a family to communicate with each other, be closer, and share some good and bad moments that happened earlier that day. Besides, eating at home is a great way to save some money. As for restaurants, I see some positive aspects about eating there too. First of all, I sometimes get tired from peeling, cutting, washing, frying, etc. It does not mean I do it a lot. Sometimes I just use the microwave and a preprocessed food that I bought earlier. I want to have something more delicious than I have in my refrigerator, something that is time-consuming to prepare at home. So, for me, it is a good reason to go to a restaurant. There one may meet old friends or just has a great time listening to music and tasting some delicious meats. Also, restaurants are a good place to celebrate something. One does not have to prepare food for all friends coming, wash dishes, put in order all that mess after the party, etc. In conclusion, I think that it does not important where one has one’s dinner. What is important is that it must be full and nutritious.
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when he
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has to
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buy
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prefer to
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buy
fresh vegetables, meat, and fruits and prepare
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food
at home.
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, other
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people
prefer to skip that step with cooking and have
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dinner
at a
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. I
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that both of these choices have
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advantages and disadvantages. Below, I will give
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reasons to support my answer.

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, I do not like
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fast
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.
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So
, my choice is always between a
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restaurant
and my home.
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, I would like to say that cooking is a great tradition. It
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helps
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people
to relax, reflect on
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some
pleasant moments while peeling or cutting the vegetables. It is a means of eliminating one’s
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stress
and tension.
Secondly
,
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sometimes
I do not
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to have
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too complicated for my
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dinner
. I
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want
to have light
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like a salad and glass of milk.
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, one of the reasons why I like to eat at home is
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because
I can have what I
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at this moment. One greater thing about eating at home is that I can sit in front of the TV and
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watch
an interesting program or a movie.
Finally
, having
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dinner
at home
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allows
a family to communicate with each other, be closer, and share
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some
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good
and
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moments that happened earlier that day.
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, eating at home is a great way to save
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money.

As for
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, I
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aspects about eating there too.
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the microwave and a preprocessed
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that I
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earlier. I
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more delicious than I have in my refrigerator,
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time-consuming to prepare at home.
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reason to go to a
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meet
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friends or
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has a great time listening to music and tasting
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delicious meats.

Also
,
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are a
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place to celebrate
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. One does not
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have to
prepare
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for all friends coming, wash dishes, put in order all that mess after the party, etc.

In conclusion
, I
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that it does not
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where one has one’s
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dinner
. What is
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is that it
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must
be full and nutritious.
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
410 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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