Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people prefer reading news and magazine content online. Other people prefer to read the news in print. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Some people prefer reading news and magazine content online. Other people prefer to read the news in print. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. qkbdr
Recently, there has been a ton of debates about which of printed reading support, or the alternative one, online support, is adequate to get news or to be entertain. We cannot deny that both of them are beneficial. Nevertheless, it is my firm position that e-news and e-magazine are definitely less detrimental rather than printed ones for several reasons, that I will elaborate on in subsequent paragraphs. First and foremost, the industry of printed is a core responsible of deforestation, and other environmental issues. Indeed, for instance, in order to provide society of paper, required to release printed magazine and news, papers' firms don't hesitate to cut a wide surface of land. As a result of this action, global warming is incredibly increasing, provoking the melting of iceberg in Greenland and the rise of sea level. Another cons is the rising deprivation of habitat for animals which normal habitats were in those woods destroyed, which are becoming threathened to desapper. In comparaison of printed magazine, online content are more safe guarenty to leave behind us a more sustainaible planet to our offspring with a preserve ecosystem. Furthermore, online contents are more affordable. I remember when I was in my first year of College, and was preparing my admission for Medical School, it was recommand to buy plenty of books neccessary to complete our skills for exam and made the difference between applycants. At this time, I was perceiving a government grant that allowed me to acquire these printed books. On the other hand, my roommates and classmates who was not touching any kind of grant from any institution, had difficulties to get books. Unfortunately, in this period, online books was not develop for scorlar contents, she was obliged to borrow money to her bank. If online schorlar books were available at this time, she would probably saved her money. In regard of this illustration, I believe that online news or magazine are more economical than which are printed. To end off, my opinion is definitely that online contents presented more advantageous for human and his society, in other words, you would rather buy online contents to save your wallet and our earth.
Recently, there has been a ton of debates about which of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
printed
reading support, or the alternative one,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
support, is adequate to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
news or to be
Consider using a past participle here: "entertained".
entertain
. We cannot deny that both of them are beneficial.
Nevertheless
, it is my firm position that e-news and e-magazine are definitely less detrimental
rather
than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
printed
ones for several reasons, that I will elaborate on in subsequent paragraphs.
First
and foremost, the industry of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
printed
is a core
The usual collocations for "responsible" is "responsible for". Did you mean "responsible for" or "in charge of"?
responsible of
deforestation, and other environmental issues.
Indeed
,
for instance
, in order to provide society of paper, required to release
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
printed
magazine and news, papers' firms don't hesitate to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
a wide surface of land.
As a result
of this action, global warming is
incredibly
increasing, provoking the melting of iceberg in Greenland and the rise of sea level. Another cons
You should probably use: "are".
is
the rising deprivation of habitat for animals which normal habitats were in those woods
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
destroyed
, which are becoming
Possible spelling mistake found.
threathened
to
Possible spelling mistake found.
desapper
. In
Possible spelling mistake found.
comparaison
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
printed
magazine,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
content
are more safe
Possible spelling mistake found.
guarenty
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
behind us a more
Possible spelling mistake found.
sustainaible
planet to our offspring with a preserve ecosystem.
Furthermore
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
contents are more affordable. I remember when I was in my
first
year of College, and was preparing my admission for Medical School, it was
Possible spelling mistake found.
recommand
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
Possible spelling mistake found.
neccessary
to complete our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
for exam and made the difference between
Possible spelling mistake found.
applycants
. At this time, I was perceiving a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
grant that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
me to acquire these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
.
On the other hand
, my roommates and classmates who was not touching any kind of grant from any institution, had difficulties to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
. Unfortunately, in this period,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
was not
Consider using a past participle here: "developed".
develop
for
Possible spelling mistake found.
scorlar
contents, she
was obliged
to borrow money to her bank. If
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
Possible spelling mistake found.
schorlar
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
were available at this time, she would
probably
The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: "save"
saved
her money. In regard of this illustration, I believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
news or magazine are more economical than which are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
printed
. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
off, my opinion is definitely that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
contents presented more advantageous for human and his society,
in other words
, you would
rather
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
contents to save your wallet and our earth.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad
Show Comments
To learn a language is to have one more window from which to look at the world.
Chinese Proverb

IELTS essay Some people prefer reading news and magazine content online. Other people prefer to read the news in print. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
362 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts