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Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. oA8K
Nowadays, most people prefer to travel alone however, I do not agree with this view and I think traveling with companion is finest Firstly, group traveling is always cheaper than traveling alone because travel expenses are shared by the group. For exaple: Last year, I managed to travel to Italy with my fruends more cheap when I was alone Secondly, during group traveling person can share their fellings and an impressions with teammates. Also i think traveling with team is less comfortable but more safety than alone because if person needs help, group members will take care to help him. In conclution, i agre with this, solo traveling has advantages but i prefer to travel with the team, becaus it is much safer, cheap and more conveniet
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traveling with companion is finest

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traveling is always cheaper than traveling alone
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expenses
are shared
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: Last year, I managed to
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to Italy with my
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when I was
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traveling person can share their
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traveling with team is less comfortable
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more safety than alone
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if person needs
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,
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members will take care to
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him.

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with this, solo traveling has advantages
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with the team,
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IELTS essay Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
126 words
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