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Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. oA8K
Nowadays, most people prefer to travel alone however, I do not agree with this view and I think traveling with companion is finest Firstly, group traveling is always cheaper than traveling alone because travel expenses are shared by the group. For exaple: Last year, I managed to travel to Italy with my fruends more cheap when I was alone Secondly, during group traveling person can share their fellings and an impressions with teammates. Also i think traveling with team is less comfortable but more safety than alone because if person needs help, group members will take care to help him. In conclution, i agre with this, solo traveling has advantages but i prefer to travel with the team, becaus it is much safer, cheap and more conveniet
Nowadays, most
people
prefer to
travel
alone
however
, I do not
agree
with this view and I
think
traveling with companion is finest

Firstly
,
group
traveling is always cheaper than traveling alone
because
travel
expenses
are shared
by the
group
. For
exaple
: Last year, I managed to
travel
to Italy with my
fruends
more
cheap
when I was
alone


Secondly
, during
group
traveling person can share their
fellings
and
an impressions
with teammates.
Also
i
think
traveling with team is less comfortable
but
more safety than alone
because
if person needs
help
,
group
members will take care to
help
him.

In
conclution
, i
agre
with this, solo traveling has advantages
but
i
prefer to
travel
with the team,
becaus
it is much safer,
cheap
and more
conveniet
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IELTS essay Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

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