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Some people lhink thot lhe news medio nowodoys hove influenced people's lives in negolive ways. To whol exfenl do you ogrce or disogree?

Some people lhink thot lhe news medio nowodoys hove influenced people's lives in negolive ways. To whol exfenl do you ogrce or disogree? xm87o
I disagree with the given statement that media has a negative influence on our lives. I believe that the media is doing a great service to us and whatever negatlve effect it has is negligible if we compare it to the benefits of the media. There are many positive effects of media. To begin with, the usefulness of the media in almost instantly providing information about events around the world is undeniable. lt is because of the media that today we don't belong to a big planet Earth; we belong to a small global village. Furthermore, media also shapes our opinions. lt is a link between the government and the people. Our conceptions of our elected officials spring from television images and newspaper stories. Most of us will never meet prime ministers or presidents, but anyone who is regularly exposed to the media will know about them. When it is time to cast our vote, we will make our decision based on the media coverage of candidates. The media are also influential in the way they facilitate the spread of culture and lifestyle. Today, the popularity of lndian culture is an example of the media's enormous impact. lt is the media, which highlights the good points of our own culture through programmes such as 'lndia's got Talent'. What is more, the reality shows of today have given exposure and fame to the common man with talent today. lndeed, with technological advancements such as the lnternet bringing even more forms of electronic media to our homes and workplaces, it is likely the media's influence will grow even stronger. Finally, the media also helps in providing justice to the common man. Who has not heard of the Jessica murder case and the case of Nithari killings? Were it not for the media, Jessica's parents would have never got justice. On the other hand, the media too has its downside. The paparazzi can invade the privacy of famous people. Sometimes violence and vulgarity is shown and at times it can shape our opinion in negative ways. For that my counter argument is that once the person becomes famous then his private life becomes public and he has no right to crib about the paparazzi. People can choose what they want to see and technology has provided them the tools to block those channels, which they don't want their children to see. Finally, God has given us brains to judge what is right or wrong. The media is just doing its job by providing us with the latest information. ln conclusion, I would like to reiterate by saying that the influence of media on our lives is largely positive.
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influence on our
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effect it has is negligible if we compare it to the

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benefits
of the media.

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effects of
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. To
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begin
with, the usefulness of the
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in almost
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instantly


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providing
information about
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events
around the world is undeniable.
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lt
is
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because
of the
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media
that
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today


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we
don't belong to a
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big
planet Earth; we belong to a
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small
global village.
Furthermore
,
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media
also
shapes

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our
opinions.
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lt
is a link between the
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government
and the
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people
. Our conceptions of our elected
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officials


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spring
from television images and newspaper stories. Most of us will never
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meet
prime ministers
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or


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presidents
,
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but
anyone who is
regularly
exposed to the
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media
will know about them. When it is time
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to


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cast
our vote, we will
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make
our decision based on the
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media
coverage of candidates.

The
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media
are
also
influential in the way they facilitate the spread of culture and lifestyle.
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Today
, the

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popularity
of
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lndian
culture is an example of the media's enormous impact.
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lt
is the
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media
, which
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highlights


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the
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good
points of our
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own
culture through
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programmes
such as '
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lndia
's
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got
Talent'.
What is more
,
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the


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reality
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shows
of
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today
have
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given
exposure and fame to the common
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man
with talent
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today
.
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lndeed
, with

technological advancements such as the
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lnternet
bringing even more forms of electronic
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media
to our

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homes
and workplaces, it is likely the media's influence will grow even stronger.
Finally
, the
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media
also


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helps
in providing justice to the common
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man
. Who has not heard of the Jessica murder case and the
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case


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of
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Nithari
killings? Were it not for the
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media
, Jessica's parents would have never
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got
justice.

On the other hand
, the
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media
too has its downside. The paparazzi can invade the privacy of
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famous


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people
.
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Sometimes
violence and vulgarity
is shown
and at times it can shape our opinion in
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negative
ways.

For that my counter argument is that once the person becomes
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famous
then his private life becomes public

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and
he has no right to crib about the paparazzi.
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People
can choose what they want to
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see
and
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technology


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has
provided them the tools to block those channels, which they don't want their children to
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see
.
Finally
,

God has
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given
us brains to judge what is right or
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wrong
. The
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media
You should probably use: "are".
is
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just
doing its job by providing us
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with


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the
latest information.

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ln
conclusion, I would like to reiterate by saying that the influence of
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media
on our
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lives
is
largely
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positive
.
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IELTS essay Some people lhink thot lhe news medio nowodoys hove influenced people's lives in negolive ways. To whol exfenl do you ogrce or disogree?

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  American English
26 paragraphs
445 words
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