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Some people in many countries believe that they need to leave their family and friends in order to find work. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh it's disadvantages.

Some people in many countries believe that they need to leave their family and friends in order to find work. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh it's disadvantages. QVEj9
In many countries in the global community, people hold a belief that they need to migrated in order to find jobs. I firmly believe that the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages. This essay will explain the advantages and disadvantages of this trend and will lead to a reasoned conclusion. There are a dulge of merits of this trend. The most preponderant one is being independent and financially stable. When a person moves away from his family he has to do all his work by himself be it cooking his meal or going to work. Thus, an individual becomes more independent. Due to economic recessions people from the developing countries migrate to the countries which offer them jobs with high wage rate. Having looked at some prons, some triffle cons associated with this trend is loneliness and taking up the wrong path. An individual away from home canbeled astray by bad company and he is not under the supervision of the parents so he can take up the wrong path. Besides this, a person away from family and friends feels alone and it can lead to adverse ramifications such as depression and tendency to suicide. In conclusion, despite some disadvantages, I firmly believe that the advantages of this trend including financial stability and being independent outweigh it's disadvantages. This the boons of this trend eclipse it's bans.
In
many
countries in the global community,
people
hold a belief that they need to migrated in order to find jobs. I
firmly
believe that the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages. This essay will
explain
the advantages and disadvantages of this
trend
and will lead to a reasoned conclusion. There are a
dulge
of merits of this
trend
. The most preponderant one is being independent and
financially
stable. When a person
moves
away from his family he
has to
do all his work by himself be it cooking his meal or going to work.
Thus
, an individual becomes more independent. Due to economic recessions
people
from the
developing countries
migrate to the countries which offer them jobs with high wage rate. Having looked at
some
prons
,
some
triffle
cons associated with this
trend
is loneliness and taking up the
wrong
path. An individual away from home
canbeled
astray by
bad
company and
he is not under the supervision of the parents
so
he can take up the
wrong
path.
Besides
this, a person away from family and friends feels alone and it can lead to adverse ramifications such as depression and tendency to suicide.
In conclusion
, despite
some
disadvantages, I
firmly
believe that the advantages of this
trend
including financial stability and being independent outweigh
it's
disadvantages. This the boons of this
trend
eclipse
it's
bans.
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IELTS essay Some people in many countries believe that they need to leave their family and friends in order to find work. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh it's disadvantages.

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