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Some people get married at young age while others marry at the age of 30 .which you think is a better option ? Give your opinion

Some people get married at young age while others marry at the age of 30. which you think is a better option? Give your opinion XnxDg

Wedding is one of the major event of life some individuals ties wedding knot in initial Period of the adulthood, in contrast, others get married by the age of 30. This essay will examine both the tendency and draws a logical conclusion in the end. To embark with, there are several benefits and drawbacks of getting married at young age. firstly, If a person get married in his 20s, then he meets to the all kind of family responsibilities due to it. He do not squander money in clubbing and partying as bachelor adults do consequently he will have a huge amount of money in the later stage of his life. Secondly, marrying at early stage of life may ruin the enjoyment of adulthood sometimes due to it Some people may feel depressed cause they believe that they took a wrong decision of getting married at young age. On the other side of fence, marrying at 30 has some merits and demerits firstly, if a person get married at 30 he will be capable of taking care of all the responsibility of married life because he partner. ped his career in his 20s without having any anxiety or fear of responsibility. Secondly. If some people thinking of getting married at age of 30 then there may be chances of getting pleasure choices in terms of finding correct partner. In conclusion, although, it is true to some extent that marrying at young age has proven beneficial for some yet I still believe that getting married at 30 has more benefits as compared with marriage at young age.

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