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Some people feel that teacher training courses can make anyone a teacher while other feels an excellent teacher cannot be made by perusing course. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that teaching is one the most important jobs existing in any society. It's related to bringing up the next generations and teachers have an essential role in countries' future. Because of this, today governments are investing more and more in training teachers. Now some people believe that teacher training courses can make anyone a teacher while other think that a good teacher cannot be made by taking courses. Here I'm going to discuss both views. Teaching is not an easy profession and just like any other job it requires knowledge, taking various courses and more importantly years of practice. In teacher training courses so many things are tought. Such as teaching techniques and principles, philosophy of teaching, psychology and lots of other things that overall we can expect they will make a good teacher. But is anyone who takes these classes going to be an excellent teacher? The answer is definitely NO! These courses are effective and important but not enough. Being a good teacher needs factors like interest, ability, motivation, etc. Hopefully those courses can even increase these elements in the person to some extent. On the other hand, some people assume that a teacher is born a teacher and there is no need to take any courses. That can be true because it seems that some people have a gift in teaching. Thay can change the most difficult subjects to easy words which are understandable for everyone, without ever taking any special teaching course. They use stories and examples to explain something to you, without even really noticing that they are using a technique. Despite all of these, we can not claim that teacher training courses are useless and we don't need them. In my opinion, these kinds of courses are completely needed. Even if you think you've got a gift in teaching, you still need to peruse these courses. They unquestionably have got new things to teach you. I'm myself studying English teaching in and these courses changed my mind 360 degree over teaching. So I think everyone who is willing to be a teacher in the future should pass these lessons. Teaching is not merely about having knowledge in a specific area but it's also about how to transfer that knowledge to your learners, how to use proper technique and new methods, how to evaluate students' progress, how to manage your class and treat with students and so many other things that I doubt we can learn by ourselves and without studying them in classes. These courses are based on a logical plan and they meet teacher's needs. They can motivate teachers perform better. Consequently, I believe we should rely on these courses and they should remain and if we truly care about educating good teachers for our society.
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the most
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important
jobs existing in any society. It's related to bringing up the
next
generations and
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teachers
have an essential role in countries' future.
Because of this
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today
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governments
are investing more and more in
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training
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teachers
.
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courses
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anyone a
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courses
. Here I'm going to discuss both views.

Teaching is not an easy profession and
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just
like any
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other
job it requires knowledge, taking various
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courses
and more
importantly
years of practice. In
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teacher
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training
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courses
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so
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many
things are
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tought
. Such as
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teaching
techniques and principles, philosophy of
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teaching
, psychology and lots of
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other
things that
overall
we can
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expect
they will
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make
a
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good
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is anyone who takes these classes going to be an excellent
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? The answer is definitely NO! These
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courses
are effective and
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important
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not
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enough
. Being a
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good
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needs
factors like interest, ability, motivation, etc.
Hopefully
those
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courses
can even increase these elements in the person to
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some
extent.

On the
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hand,
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people
assume that a
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is born
a
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and there is no
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need
to take any
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courses
. That can be true
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because
it seems that
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people
have a gift in
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.
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can
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change
the most difficult subjects to easy words which are understandable for everyone, without ever taking any special
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teaching
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course
. They
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use
stories and examples to
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explain
something to you, without even
really
noticing that they are using a technique. Despite all of these, we can not claim that
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teacher
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training
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courses
are
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useless and
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them.

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courses
are completely needed. Even if you
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think
you've
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, you
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. They
unquestionably
have
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got
new things to teach you. I'm myself studying English
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in and these
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changed
my mind 360 degree over
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.
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I
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everyone who is willing to be a
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in the future should pass these lessons.
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Teaching
is not
merely
about having knowledge in a specific area
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but
it's
also
about how to transfer that knowledge to your learners, how to
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use
proper technique and new methods, how to evaluate students' progress, how to manage your
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class
and treat with students and
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so
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many
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other
things that I doubt we can learn by ourselves and without studying them in classes. These
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courses
are based
on a logical
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plan and
they
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meet
teacher's
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needs
. They can motivate
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teachers
perform better.
Consequently
, I believe we should rely on these
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courses and
they should remain and if we
truly
care about educating
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good
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teachers
for our society.
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IELTS essay Some people feel that teacher training courses can make anyone a teacher while other feels an excellent teacher cannot be made by perusing course.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
467 words
5.5
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