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Some people feel that petrol cars should be banned. Other feel that we should be allowed to drive petrol cars. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

People have different views about benefits of using or not benzine cars. While there are good side of petrol vehicles. But I think that its are not usually more productive. There are a number of negative sides of petrol cars. Firstly, When we use a lot of cars that work only benzine, Air pollution is extremely seed up and this may lead up to many diseases. Secondly, cost of petrol is perceptible expensive to buy for everyone either Rich or poor. As well as at many areas is very less filling station for benzine vehicles. On the other hand, benzine cars provide us unlimited benefits. One of the most considerable advantage its are safe. in other words petrol is very useful for cars' motors and avoid frequently collops
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benzine, Air pollution is
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buy
for everyone either Rich or poor.
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less filling station for benzine vehicles.
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provide us unlimited benefits. One of the most considerable advantage its are safe.
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IELTS essay Some people feel that petrol cars should be banned. Other feel that we should be allowed to drive petrol cars.

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  American English
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127 words
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