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Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. How far do you agree? What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. How far do you agree? What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid? dRa2
Few people sense that a number of profession such as nurses, doctors and teachers are crucial part of society yet they paid not so much as film actors or company bosses. My opinion I discuss in an essay. To begin with, teachers, doctors and nurses are the backbone of our society. They are paid low because they works for 30 to 35 years. However, they protect our future and build up our country educated. For instance, the doctor the doctors works 24 hours in this covid-19 pandemic together with they cure patients to put their life in risk. Moreover, teachers plays chief role to grow natures future. As they educated youngsters and they are the future of our country. So it is advisable to paid more to teachers and doctors too. on the other side, film actors or company bosses paid high. Firstly, if we discuss about film actor they entertain people but to entertain us they have to eork hard and they work for day an night. Because of this reasons, it is fair to paid high. Secondly, company's bosses are also paid high due to there position which required responsibility of growth of company. To conclude, in my opinion both proffesions should pay equally as they work hard for country's future.
Few
people
sense that a number of profession such as nurses,
doctors
and
teachers
are crucial part of society
yet
they
paid
not
so
much as film actors or
company
bosses. My opinion I discuss in an essay. To
begin
with,
teachers
,
doctors
and nurses are the backbone of our society. They are
paid
low
because
they
works
for 30 to 35 years.
However
, they protect our
future
and build up our country educated.
For instance
, the
doctor
the
doctors
works 24 hours in this
covid-19
pandemic together with they cure patients to put their
life
in
risk
.
Moreover
,
teachers
plays chief role to grow natures
future
. As they educated
youngsters and
they are the
future
of our country.
So
it is advisable to
paid
more to
teachers
and
doctors
too.
on
the other side, film actors or
company
bosses
paid
high.
Firstly
, if we
discuss about film
actor they entertain
people
but
to entertain us they
have to
eork
hard and
they
work
for day
an
night.
Because
of
this
reasons, it is
fair
to
paid
high.
Secondly
,
company
's bosses are
also
paid
high due to there position which required responsibility of growth of
company
.
To conclude
, in my opinion both
proffesions
should pay
equally as
they
work
hard
for country's
future
.
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IELTS essay Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. How far do you agree? What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

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