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Describes a leisure activity which you enjoy doing.

Describes a leisure activity which you enjoy doing. Nmaj0
There are many leisure activities that I truly enjoy doing. However, a leisure activity which I love to enjoy doing the most is watching cooking shows. When I want to be productive, I go to watch cooking shows. It isn’t difficult to enjoy doing that, I just watch it directly through my laptop and search for different kinds of food recipes that I want to watch. Talking about how often I watch, I can say I watch while eating my meals, mostly lunch and dinner, and I notice that I watch twice a week, Saturday and Sunday are the most days I usually watch. Watching cooking shows, I don’t need anything like cooking equipment because I want to learn from the video first, I don't really like practicing while watching it. However, after finishing watching, I will practice it later, but not the day after watching, but some days that I want to cook. There are some reasons why I like doing this activity. First, I can know how to cook any kind of food because later on no one will cook for me when I grow bigger, so I should learn how to do it practically. And I see that I am addicted to watching cooking shows recently for no reason. Second, watching cooking shows makes me happy because every time I see or hear the word ‘’food’, I suddenly get chilled. I think that food can release my stress as well. To sum up, watching cooking shows can be my number 1 favorite leisure activity.
There are
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, a leisure
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to enjoy
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doing
the most is watching cooking
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shows
. When I
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want
to be productive, I go to
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watch
cooking
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shows
. It isn’t difficult to enjoy
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doing
that, I
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it
directly
through my laptop and search for
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different
kinds of
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food
recipes that I
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want
to
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watch
. Talking about how
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I
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, I can say I
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while eating my meals,
mostly
lunch and dinner, and I notice that I
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watch
twice a week, Saturday and Sunday are the most days I
usually
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watch
. Watching cooking
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shows
, I don’t need anything like cooking equipment
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I
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want
to learn from the video
first
, I don't
really
like practicing while watching it.
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, after finishing watching, I will practice it later,
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not the day after watching,
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want
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reasons why I like
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activity
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First
, I can know how to cook any kind of
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food
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because
later on no one will cook for me when I grow bigger,
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so
I should learn how to do it
practically
. And I
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recently for no reason. Second, watching cooking
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shows
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makes
me happy
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every time I
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see
or hear the word
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‘’food’
, I
suddenly
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get
chilled. I
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think
that
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food
can release my
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stress
as well
. To sum up, watching cooking
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shows
can be my number 1 favorite leisure
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activity
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IELTS essay Describes a leisure activity which you enjoy doing.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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