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Some people consider online study courses better than classroom studies, while others think classroom study is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.1

Some people consider online study courses better than classroom studies, while others think classroom study is better. v. 1
Nowadays, online classes have become more popular and many students enrol in them. There are, nonetheless, some learners who still prefer traditional classroom learning. In my opinion, traditional courses and online courses both have their merits; even so, I feel that online courses are better than regular classroom courses in many ways. Online classes certainly have numerous advantages associated with them. To start with, they are much cheaper than traditional courses. By enrolling in an online programme, poor students who cannot afford expensive collage education can acquire valuable skills and earn degrees, that too from the comfort of their home. Another advantage of online courses is their flexibility. You can take them whenever you want and from wherever you are. By contrast, in order to do a regular course, you have to be in a classroom at a specific time. If you cannot make it at that time, you will miss the class. This is not the case with online learning. The ease of taking the class at a time convenient to the learner has made it quite popular among working professionals who want to upgrade their skills. By contrast, traditional classroom learning also has its benefits. The most important among them is the better interaction between the teacher and the student. A machine can only deliver the lessons; it cannot figure out whether the student has understood the concepts. A teacher, on the other hand, can easily figure out whether the student has understood something by simply looking at their face. As a result, teachers can clear doubts then and there and this helps with the progress of the student. Yet, the lack of flexibility and higher costs make traditional learning an unviable option for many students. To conclude, after analysing both sides of the argument it is not hard to see that traditional learning and online learning have their merits and demerits. However, in my opinion, online learning is better because it makes education accessible to almost everyone – even people who have a full time job.
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have become more popular and
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many
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students
enrol in them. There are, nonetheless,
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some
learners
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who
still
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traditional
classroom
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. In my opinion,
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traditional
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and
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online
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courses
both have their merits; even
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, I feel that
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online
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courses
are better than regular classroom
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in
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ways.

Online
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classes
certainly
have numerous advantages associated with them. To
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start
with, they are much cheaper than
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traditional
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courses
. By enrolling in an
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online
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programme
, poor
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students
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who
cannot afford expensive collage education can acquire valuable
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skills
and earn degrees, that too from the comfort of their home. Another advantage of
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online
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courses
is their flexibility. You can take them whenever you want and from wherever you are. By contrast, in order to do a regular
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course
, you
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have to
be in a classroom at a specific
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time
. If you cannot
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make
it at that
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time
, you will miss the
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class
. This is not the case with
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online
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learning
. The
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ease
of taking the
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class
at a
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time
convenient to the learner has made it quite popular among working professionals
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who
want to upgrade their
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skills
.

By contrast,
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traditional
classroom
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learning
also
has its benefits. The most
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important
among them is the better interaction between the teacher and the
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student
. A machine can
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only
deliver the lessons; it cannot figure out whether the
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student
has understood the concepts. A teacher,
on the other hand
, can
easily
figure out whether the
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student
has understood something by
simply
looking at their face.
As a result
, teachers can
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clear
doubts then and there and this
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helps
with the progress of the
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student
.
Yet
, the lack of flexibility and higher costs
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make
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traditional
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learning
an unviable option for
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many
students.

To conclude
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both sides of the argument it is not
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to
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that
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traditional
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and
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online
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learning
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their merits and demerits.
However
, in my opinion,
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online
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learning
is better
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because
it
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makes
education accessible to almost everyone
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–
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people
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have a full
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job.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
44Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people consider online study courses better than classroom studies, while others think classroom study is better. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
339 words
6
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