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Some people claim that not enough of tue waste from homes is recycled.They say that the only way yo increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Some people claim that not enough of tue waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way yo increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. 85gLr
A large number of people maintain that the garbage recycled from residential houses is not sufficient. They tell that the unique method to rise recycling is for state to create it a law of demand. I totally agree that making laws, especially in such a world-wide issue could be more beneficial in increasing awareness among the members of our society. Firstly, this essay will discuss the main reason of establishing strict rules by governments and secondly will show how to strengthen recycling process through government-based campaigns. First and foremost, in our today’s world the greatest percentage of our population is unwilling to protect our planet Earth. Their careless attitude towards our environment could damage our community’s prosperity, as well as, leave residents’ lives under a great danger. In other words, laws that help surroundings feel more responsible due to their actions and take part in recycling process much better are created to intensify warning among populations. For example, nowadays in India, due to strict rules created by government, 6 out of 10 residents take part in recycling actively. On the other hand, government-based campaigns through technological advancements are a more appropriate way in inviting a wide range of people to the right direction. Furthermore, in our everyday life TV, radio or numerous social networks suc as Whatsapp and Instagram have a huge impact on people to execute significant decisions. Consequently, meeting significance of recycling might change citizens’ thoughts in a friendly way. For instance, according to BBC news, in recent years in the UK, recycling had a major role in decreasing waste materials to 40%. In conclusion, a group of humans believe that the lowest proportion of litter is recycled, while other parts think that authorities should apply for their legal laws in empowering recycling everywhere easily. In reality, laws could have an essential influence in rising the amount of people who could contribute to society through recycling, moreover, the importance of various campaigns due to serious requirements by states.
Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"
A large number of
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people
maintain that the garbage recycled from residential
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houses
is not sufficient. They
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
that the unique method to rise
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recycling
is for state to create it a
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law
of demand. I
totally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that making
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laws
,
especially
in such a world-wide issue could be more beneficial in increasing awareness among the members of our society.
Firstly
, this essay will discuss the main reason of establishing strict
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
and
secondly
will
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show
how to strengthen
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recycling
process through
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
-based campaigns.
First
and foremost, in our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
’s world the greatest percentage of our population is unwilling to protect our planet Earth. Their careless attitude towards our environment could damage our community’s prosperity,
as well
as,
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leave
residents’
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lives
under a great
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danger
.
In other words
,
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laws
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
surroundings feel more responsible due to their actions and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
process much better
are created
to intensify warning among populations.
For example
, nowadays in India, due to strict
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
created by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
, 6 out of 10 residents
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
actively
.
On the other hand
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
-based campaigns through technological advancements are a more appropriate way in inviting a wide range of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to the right direction.
Furthermore
, in our everyday life TV, radio or numerous social networks
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suc
as
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Whatsapp
and Instagram have a huge impact on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to execute significant decisions.
Consequently
, meeting significance of
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recycling
might
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
citizens’ thoughts
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in a friendly way
.
For instance
, according to BBC news, in recent years in the UK,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
had a major role in decreasing waste materials to 40%.
In conclusion
, a group of humans
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believe
that the lowest proportion of litter
is recycled
, while other parts
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that authorities should apply for their legal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
in empowering
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
everywhere
easily
. In reality,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
could have an essential influence in rising the amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who could contribute to society through
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
,
moreover
, the importance of various campaigns due to serious requirements by states.
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of tue waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way yo increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

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