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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. do52E
Many people neglect to recycle their waste properly. So, I think government should take legal steps to increase the awareness among people to utilize their home waste. Responsible people realize the importance of proper utility of domestic waste, on the other hand, others show their negligence in this matter. Few people store their household waste collected from green vegetables, fruits etcetera, plastic bottles of mineral waters or cold drinks, juices and so no, plastic bags, poly items, worn dress, fabric and then provide them to the domestic waste collector for recycling it. From vegetables and foods staff fertilizer can be made, which later on is used for agriculture purposes, plastic bottles, cans, bags, poly can be again re used for packing and packaging, old fabric or dress can be again used for manufacturing cloths in the textile fields. Ultimately recycling of the domestic used goods have lessen the manufacturing cost as same thing is using again and again so it saves the raw materials expenses. I know a Bangladesh fashion designer in Dhaka, named Afsana Ferdousi, she collects the skin of potatoes, onions and others vegetables, later on by processing she uses these waste to dye the fabric. As the fabric is dyed from natural staff, they are eco-friendly and also cost effective. Though recycling has so many advantages, some people failed to understand the importance and they overlook this matter. Government should take effective steps to encourage people to recycle the domestic waste. Say for example they can announce some lucrative reward who will make top utilization of their used waste or who give highest quantity of waste for recycling. They can also impose law, which has to obey by every family in a city like as, allocate a fixed quantity of waste should be recycled otherwise people will be punished by government. Above all government should raise awareness by arranging seminars and promoting the crucial importance of recycling domestic waste.
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neglect to recycle their
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properly
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, I
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government
should take legal steps to increase the awareness among
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people
to utilize their home waste.

Responsible
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people
realize the importance of proper utility of
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domestic
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waste
,
on the other hand
, others
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show
their negligence in this matter. Few
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people
store their household
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waste
collected from green vegetables, fruits etcetera, plastic bottles of mineral waters or
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cold
drinks, juices and
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so
no, plastic bags,
poly
items, worn dress,
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fabric
and then provide them to the
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domestic
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waste
collector for
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recycling
it. From vegetables and foods staff fertilizer can
be made
, which later on is
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used
for agriculture purposes, plastic bottles, cans, bags,
poly
can be
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again
re
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used
for packing and packaging,
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old
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fabric
or dress can be
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again
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used
for manufacturing cloths in the textile fields.
Ultimately
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recycling
of the
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domestic
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used
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goods
have
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lessen
the manufacturing cost as same thing is using
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and
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again
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it saves the raw materials expenses. I know a Bangladesh fashion designer in Dhaka, named
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Afsana
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Ferdousi
, she collects the skin of potatoes, onions
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and others
vegetables, later on by processing she
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uses
these
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waste
to dye the
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fabric
. As the
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fabric
is dyed
from natural staff, they are eco-friendly and
also
cost effective. Though
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recycling
has
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so
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many
advantages,
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people
failed to understand the
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importance and
they overlook this matter.

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Government
should take effective steps to encourage
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people
to recycle the
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domestic
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waste
. Say
for example
they can announce
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some
lucrative reward who will
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make
top utilization of their
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used
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waste
or who give
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highest
quantity of
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waste
for
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recycling
. They can
also
impose law, which
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has to
obey by every family in a city like as, allocate a
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fixed
quantity of
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waste
should
be recycled
otherwise
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people
will
be punished
by
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government
.
Above all
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government
should raise awareness by arranging seminars and promoting the crucial importance of
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recycling
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domestic
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waste
.
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
322 words
5.5
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