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Some People Claim that Not Enough of the Waste from Homes is Recycled

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Some people opine that waste from houses is usually not recycled. So they propose that the government can bring about a change in society by imposing strict laws on recycling, which can be an effective way to increase the recycling rate among the public. I strongly agree with this statement to an extent. I think the government should initiate environmental protection laws so that people are educated about them and implement them in their lives. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will be explaining my views on the same. Over the years, we have been taught that the wastes/disposals can be pulled off in an efficient manner by simply focusing on the 3 R’s, which stand for Reduce, Reuse, and Recycle. Although the 3 R’s are very effective, they’re pretty hard to implement. Thus, the government should implement laws and regulations that solely focus on helping people to reduce wastes/ disposals and reuse products. Further, the government should start campaigns on the importance of recycling wastes and teach everyone to practise the recycling process and reuse those products. Moreover, the schools can also educate the students about the environmental impact and significance of the recycling and reusing process so that they can divide and pack the recyclable and non-recyclable wastes and later dump them into the recycling bins. Furthermore, the government should initiate legal regulations and laws related to recycling management, so that the public may adopt and follow these environmental practices as there are some people who abide only by the government rules. Moreover, the government can facilitate the recycling facilities in each city by distributing compost bins. This way, the environment will be much cleaner and greener. The environment will be significantly affected and polluted if people do not follow the recycling process or throw away the disposals properly. Some people think it is individual responsibility and this does not need to be made a law. But if not for laws, no one cares to be responsible. In a nutshell, I strongly believe that people should be encouraged to recycle waste products and if the governments and citizens keep up their efforts, then we can definitely preserve and protect our environmental resources for future generations to come.
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government
can bring about a
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change
in society by imposing strict
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on
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recycling
, which can be an effective way to increase the
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recycling
rate among the public. I
strongly
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agree
with this statement to an extent. I
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think
the
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government
should initiate
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environmental
protection
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laws
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so
that
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people
are educated
about them and implement them in their
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lives
. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will be explaining my views on the same.

Over the years, we have
been taught
that the wastes/disposals can
be pulled
off
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in an efficient manner
by
simply
focusing on the 3 R’s, which stand for
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Reduce
, Reuse, and Recycle. Although the 3 R’s are
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very
effective, they’re pretty
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hard
to implement.
Thus
, the
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government
should implement
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laws
and regulations that
solely
focus on helping
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people
to
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reduce
wastes/ disposals and reuse products.
Further
, the
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government
should
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start
campaigns on the importance of
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recycling
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wastes
and teach everyone to
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practise
the
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recycling
process and reuse those products.
Moreover
, the schools can
also
educate the students about the
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environmental
impact and significance of the
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recycling
and reusing process
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so
that they can divide and pack the recyclable and non-recyclable
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wastes
and later dump them into the
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recycling
bins.

Furthermore
, the
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government
should initiate legal regulations and
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laws
related to
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recycling
management,
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so
that the public may adopt and follow these
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environmental
practices as there are
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some
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people
who abide
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only
by the
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government
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rules
.
Moreover
, the
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government
can facilitate the
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recycling
facilities in each city by distributing compost bins. This way, the environment will be much cleaner and greener. The environment will be
significantly
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affected
and polluted if
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people
do not follow the
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recycling
process or throw away the disposals
properly
.

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people
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think
it is individual responsibility and this does not need to
be made
a
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law
.
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if not for
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laws
, no one cares to be responsible.

In a nutshell, I
strongly
believe that
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people
should
be encouraged
to recycle
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waste
products and if the
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governments
and citizens
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keep
up their efforts, then we can definitely preserve and protect our
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environmental
resources for future generations to
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come
.
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IELTS essay Some People Claim that Not Enough of the Waste from Homes is Recycled

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
368 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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