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How have your experiences at school influenced your socialization?

How have your experiences at school influenced your socialization? L38lp

Growing up in this modern era, there are several social groups that will affect your socialization: family, school, peer group, media and so much more. However, I believe that school plays an important role on influence our socialization and what we have experienced at school may decide how we behave. School is known as the second set where young people spend most of their time learning and experiencing new things. That’s why most of the life skills people learn are from school. At school, students need to be independent to achieve their own goals as there are many other students in the same class. If they ever fail in any class, that might be the motivation for them to continue to stand up and strive. Moreover, students will meet new friends and teachers after a school year, so it’s important for them to know how to adapt to different circumstances. They may learn how to self-control after a fight during a conversation, learn how to rebut to a wrong statement, learn how to participate with their teams after failing in a teamwork project. To sum up,

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