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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. RNkbp
Some people express the idea that the wastes produced in household is not being recycled at a level as it should be. They think that, it should be implied through legal bindings. Whereas, others think that the legal steps has little to do in this case. I think that, legislative measures can ensure proper recycling of wastage. To begin with, there is a huge amount of wastage being produced at household. A significant portion of this wastage is thrown away. This causes different types of pollution. The wastage are sometimes inedible. Stray dogs, crows or other animals eat from this wastage and fall sick. Some wastage may also evaporates in the air and cause air pollution. For example, if the houses through away wastage of chicken or beef parts in an open area, it will be rotten and cause air pollution after a period of time. At the same time, the authorities may not have the manpower or arrangement to monitor the surroundings of the household on a regular basis. They may not have the set-up to clean the wastage. Enacting legal bindings will make everyone aware of their wastage management. The legal fines or actions have a long lasting effect. The procedure is official which creates mass concern. The law covers the general mass as well as the authorities. Both of the parties will be responsible for their actions. Being said that, I believe a legal structure to level up the recycling of household wastage is the right step for the government.
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express the
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idea
that the wastes produced in
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household
is not
being recycled
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think
that, it should
be implied
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legal
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think
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legal
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to do
in this case
. I
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think
that, legislative measures can ensure proper recycling of wastage.

To
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begin
with, there is a huge amount of
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wastage
being produced
at
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household
. A significant portion of this
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wastage
is thrown
away. This causes
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different
types of pollution. The
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wastage
are
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sometimes
inedible. Stray dogs, crows or other animals eat from this
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wastage
and fall sick.
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Some
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wastage
may
also
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evaporates
in the air and cause air pollution.
For example
, if the
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houses
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through
away
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wastage
of chicken or beef parts in an open area, it will be rotten and cause air pollution after a period of time.

At the same time, the authorities may not have the manpower or arrangement to monitor the surroundings of the
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household
on a regular basis. They may not have the set-up to clean the wastage.

Enacting
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legal
bindings will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
everyone aware of their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wastage
management. The
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legal
fines or actions have a
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long lasting
effect. The procedure is official which creates mass concern.
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The
law covers the general mass
as well
as the authorities. Both of the parties will be responsible for their actions.
Being said
that, I believe a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
legal
structure to level up the recycling of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
household
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wastage
is the right step for the
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government
.
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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