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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

In recent years, process of recycling has became very popular and some people opine that government is the only authority to convince people to recycle the waste products. In my perspective, even-though stringent laws should be enacted but some other ways could be adopted so that recycling process can be enhanced. Starting with the policies imposed by government on the waste, people must keep recycle-able waste separate from other kind of wastes. It will be convenient for the authorities to recycle it, so fines should be charged if a person mix up the waste. For example, Australian government has passed new policy to recycle and reuse the waste and it proved very beneficial for the environment. In fact not only punishment is helpful but government could also reward people if they perform any positive activity or recycle their household wastes. Hence, laws are imperative and should be implemented to encourage people for recycling the wastes. Some other steps could be valuable, students should be taught in school about the benefits of the recycled products as it is very crucial to have healthy and hygienic environment. Admittedly, every province has its own decree and these should be telecasted on TV and banners should be put on public places so that every individual could understand the upcoming drawbacks, if they do not recycle the waste. Every city council should have their own recycling plant through which they can recycle the unwanted waste and re-use it. To conclude, indubitably, government plays part and parcel role in implementing laws and to make recycling as a legal requirement. On the same time, an individual and society members can also adopt some workable steps and recycle the waste products.
In recent years, process of
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recycling
has
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became
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very
popular and
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some
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people
opine that
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government
is the
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only
authority to convince
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people
to
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recycle
the
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waste
products. In my perspective, even-though stringent laws should be
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enacted
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but
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some
other ways could
be adopted
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so
that
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recycling
process can
be enhanced
.

Starting with the policies imposed by
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government
on the
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waste
,
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people
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must
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keep
recycle-able
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waste
separate from other kind of
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wastes
. It will be convenient for the authorities to
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recycle
it,
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so
fines should
be charged
if a person mix up the
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waste
.
For example
, Australian
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government
has passed new policy to
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recycle
and reuse the
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waste and
it proved
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very
beneficial for the environment. In fact not
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only
punishment is helpful
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but
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government
could
also
reward
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people
if they perform any
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positive
activity or
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recycle
their household
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wastes
.
Hence
, laws are imperative and should
be implemented
to encourage
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people
for
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recycling
the wastes.

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Some
other steps could be valuable, students should
be taught
in school about the benefits of the recycled products as it is
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very
crucial to have healthy and hygienic environment.
Admittedly
, every province has its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
decree and these should
be telecasted
on TV and banners should
be put
on public places
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so
that every individual could understand the upcoming drawbacks, if they do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
. Every city council should have their
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own
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recycling
plant through which they can
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recycle
the unwanted
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waste
and re-
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use
it.

To conclude
,
indubitably
,
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government
plays part and parcel role in implementing laws and to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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recycling
as a legal requirement. On the same time, an individual and society members can
also
adopt
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some
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workable
steps and
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recycle
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
products.
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
6.0
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