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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from hoes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from hoes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it legal requirement. ngl7
In this ultra-modern society, people approach become materialistic. Section of people opine that domestic litters not recycled as enough as required and they believe that legal action by authority is necessary to improve the situation. I personally believe that only law enforcement not enough to solve this problem. It is true that people are become more care less to make wastage without thinking any consequences of their action, there are several reason behind this. Firstly, Not enough awareness about the recycling process. By this citizen could not decide which item will be recyclable and which not. Secondly, there are not any specific effective system available to collect domestic waste according to recyclable category. Finally, No any restriction or punishment on consumer as well as on producer to produce and purchase that kind of item which has huge amount of non-recyclable material. For instance, Producer sell their item with cheaper quality material which could not recycled, that would definitely generate huge wastage when buyers purchase this. When we looking for to emboss law on the metropolitans regarding to improve recycling, then I believe this will improve situation on some extend only. The strict law can restrict manufacturer and consumer both to reduce waste. However, there are more action required to cure this problem. For this government has to launch awareness program regarding recycling for localize with the help of different sources like television, Radio or social media. Also, center can provide some intensive in reward of recycle waste. Moreover, Center should established full proof system to collect waste from every door to door and recycle it. In conclusion, I believe that in current situation household wastage not recycled as much as required, while unawareness, sure system, and no any restriction main seasons behind this. This problem could not solve only with specific restriction but some other action like public awareness, reward and full proof system also required to solve this recycling problem.
In this ultra-modern society,
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people
approach become materialistic. Section of
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people
opine that domestic litters not recycled as
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enough
as
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required and
they
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believe
that legal
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action
by authority is necessary to
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improve
the situation. I
personally
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believe
that
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only
law enforcement not
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enough
to solve this problem.

It is true that
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people
are become
more care less to
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make
wastage without thinking any consequences of their
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action
, there are several reason behind this.
Firstly
, Not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
awareness about the
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recycling
process. By this citizen could not decide which item will be recyclable and which not.
Secondly
, there are not any specific effective
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system
available to collect domestic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
according to recyclable category.
Finally
,
Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
No
any restriction or punishment on consumer
as well
as on producer to produce and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
that kind of item which has huge amount of non-recyclable material.
For instance
, Producer sell their item with cheaper quality material which could not recycled, that would definitely generate huge wastage when buyers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
this.

When
Did you mean "we're looking", "we are looking", or "we were looking"?
we looking
for to emboss law on the metropolitans
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regarding to
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improve
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recycling
, then I
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believe
this will
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improve
situation on
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some
Did you mean "extent" ('extent' is a noun, 'extend' is a verb)?
extend
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only
. The strict law can restrict manufacturer and consumer both to
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reduce
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waste
.
However
, there are more
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action
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required
to cure this problem. For this
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government
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has to
launch awareness program regarding
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recycling
for localize with the
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help
of
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different
sources like television, Radio or social media.
Also
, center can provide
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some
intensive in reward of recycle
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waste
.
Moreover
, Center should
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established
full proof
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system
to collect
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waste
from every door to door and recycle it.

In conclusion
, I
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believe
that in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
situation household wastage not recycled as much as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
required
, while unawareness, sure
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
system
, and
Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
no
any restriction main seasons behind this. This problem could not solve
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only
with specific restriction
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but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other
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action
like public awareness, reward and full proof
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
system
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
required
to solve this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
problem.
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from hoes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it legal requirement.

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321 words
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