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Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. with this statement? xdXo

It is generally believed that women are more reliable in upbringing children rather than men due to the fact that they are the only one who can give emotional support to their child. But, it does not mean that they can not do job simultaneously. In fact, females are considered as multi-taskers. The reason behind it is that they are actually brought up in that way. The essay is going to discuss the reasons behind my opinion along with some relevant examples prior embarking to any plausible conclusion.

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