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some people claim that not enough of the waste frim homes is recycled. they say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. to what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

some people claim that not enough of the waste frim homes is recycled. they say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. 0LD1
It is common today, that wastes from homes is not recycled. This can be seen that households are not recycling that waste. In my point of view, government should make it a legal requirement by establishing laws relating to the recycling. this will be proven by analyzing the various areas. Looking first at, government must take a number of strict action to prepare it as a part of their legal responsibility, that waste from homes must be recycled. If someone will go against that rule, there's must be a punishment in the form of fine or escape. For instance, if anyone found, that waste from home is not recycled he/she will be punished. This example clearly show that if govt. make it a legal requirement then people will follow that rule in order to avoid the punishment. Laws are needed in order to be legalize the recycling, legal bodies should introduce new laws, so that, people will follow and waste should be recycle. After analyzing the various areas, the legalization of recycling is necessary to overcome the problem of recycling. hence, it is has been proven that rules are crucial for restricting the wastes.
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today
, that
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wastes
from homes is not recycled. This can be
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seen
that households are not
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recycling
that
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waste
. In my point of view,
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government
should
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it a
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legal
requirement by establishing laws relating to the
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recycling
.
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this
will
be proven
by analyzing the various areas. Looking
first
at,
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government
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must
take a number of strict action to prepare it as a part of their
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legal
responsibility, that
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waste
from homes
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must
be recycled
. If someone
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will go
against that
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rule
, there's
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must
be a punishment in the form of fine or escape.
For instance
, if anyone found, that
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waste
from home is not recycled he/she will
be punished
. This example
clearly
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show
that if govt.
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make
it a
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legal
requirement then
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people
will follow that
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rule
in order to avoid the punishment. Laws
are needed
in order to be
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legalize
the
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recycling
,
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legal
bodies should introduce new laws,
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so
that,
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people
will follow and
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waste
should be
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recycle
. After analyzing the various areas, the legalization of
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recycling
is necessary to overcome the problem of
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recycling
.
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hence
, it is has
been proven
that
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rules
are crucial for restricting the
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wastes
.

IELTS essay some people claim that not enough of the waste frim homes is recycled. they say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

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194 words
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