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Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. discuss both sides and give your opinion

Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. discuss both sides and give your opinion dm77
Some believe that the solution of traffic jams in cities can be cater by banning private own vehicles while others is of the view that this is not the solution of the problem. In my opinion providing alternate cheap means of transport can be the solution. The congestion on roads can be stopped by curbing the use of private vehicles. Nowadays, everyone owns car in urban centers and frequent use of private mean of transport results in an increased in number of motors. Even for the short distance, prefer to travel in their own cars. For instance, in Karachi according to the report of the Asian Development Bank the number of vehicles have been increased two-fold; consequently, increase in traffic jams and pollution in city center can be observed in center of city. I believe that stopping the use of private motors will not have any positive impact in city center. Banning the private motors is not the real time solution for the traffic congestion. Most of the commercialized buildings and offices are located in center of the city and working force need means of transport to reach to their destination on time therefore, they opted the use of private motors. However, if the alternate means of transport such as public buses, cycles and mass transit is promoted that would have positive impact on reducing the numbers of vehicles on roads whereas, road infrastructure need to be maintained in urban areas as well. For example, in Taiwan sidewalks have been promoted and use of bi-cycles have increased widely by the masses for travelling that results in the decreased traffic jams and pollution reduction. In my opinion, alternate means of travel should be promoted by government. In a nutshell, banning vehicles is not the actual solution whereas, road congestion can be reduced by improving the public transports and other means of travel such as bicycles and bullet trains.
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car in urban
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centers
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transport
results in an increased in number of motors.

Even for the short distance, prefer to travel in their
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own
cars.
For instance
, in Karachi according to the report of the Asian Development Bank the number of
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vehicles
have
been increased
two-fold;
consequently
, increase in
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traffic
jams and pollution in city center can
be observed
in center of city. I believe that stopping the
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private
motors will not have any
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positive
impact in city center.

Banning the
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private
motors is not the real time
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solution
for the
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traffic
congestion. Most of the commercialized buildings and offices
are located
in center of the city and working force need
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means
of
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transport
to reach to their destination on time
therefore
, they opted the
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use
of
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private
motors.
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means
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transport
such as public buses, cycles and mass transit
is promoted
that would have
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positive
impact on reducing the numbers of
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on
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whereas,
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infrastructure need to
be maintained
in urban areas
as well
.
For example
, in Taiwan sidewalks have
been promoted
and
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use
of bi-cycles have increased
widely
by the masses for travelling that results in the decreased
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traffic
jams and pollution reduction. In my opinion, alternate
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means
of travel should
be promoted
by
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government
.

In a nutshell, banning
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vehicles
is not the actual
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solution
whereas,
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road
congestion can be
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reduced
by improving the public
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transports
and other
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means
of travel such as bicycles and bullet trains.
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IELTS essay Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. discuss both sides and give your opinion

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