Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Gylg
In current era more and more people are opting for vegetarianism due to wide variety of harmful effects of eating meat. Most common issues of eating meat are health problems and deterioration of our environment. I totally agree with consumption of healthy, clean and fresh plant based diet. Eating meat has a number of side effects. Most common are increase incidence of cardiac pathologies. Meat namely Beef and Pork is highly concentrated with trans fat it can lead to fat deposits in blood vessels also called as atherosclerosis. All this ends in to Hypertension, Angina and Increase incidence of heart attacks. Other negative effect include deteriorating Ecosystem. Natural food chain is hindered moreover all the animal butchered their waste is not recycled properly as a result it can enter and contaminate our water and soil. For instance the waste from butcher shops in Uttar Pradesh is all dump in river Ganges which ends in to low water quality also effecting the flora and fauna of the river. In conclusion I think vegetarian diet is far beneficial for human health as well as environment due minimal side effects. Turning towards non vegetarian food it's not only effecting health, Also put pressure on our ecosystem. In order to preserve health and environment we must avoid consuming Meat.
In
current
era more and more
people
are opting for vegetarianism due to wide variety of harmful effects of eating
meat
. Most common issues of eating
meat
are
health
problems and deterioration of our environment. I
totally
agree
with consumption of healthy, clean and fresh plant based diet.

Eating
meat
has a number of side effects. Most common are increase incidence of cardiac pathologies.
Meat
namely
Beef and Pork is
highly
concentrated with trans
fat
it can lead to
fat
deposits in blood vessels
also
called as atherosclerosis. All this ends in to Hypertension, Angina and Increase incidence of heart attacks.

Other
negative
effect
include deteriorating Ecosystem. Natural food chain
is hindered
moreover
all the animal butchered their waste is not recycled
properly
as a result
it can enter and contaminate our water and soil.
For instance
the waste from butcher shops in Uttar Pradesh is all dump in river Ganges which ends in to low water quality
also
effecting the flora and fauna of the river.

In
conclusion I
think
vegetarian diet is far beneficial for human
health
as well
as environment due minimal side effects. Turning towards
non vegetarian
food it's not
only
effecting
health
,
Also
put pressure on our ecosystem. In order to preserve
health
and environment we
must
avoid consuming
Meat
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
215 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts