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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement MABo
It is universally accepted that due to the advancement of modern communication system relations among nations has been increased markedly. Consequently, as a result of that living in a nation where have to converse with a foreign language has become a controversial issue in the global village. Moreover, some academicians claim that speaking a foreign language in an exotic nation can provoke crucial social hardships, as well as empirical issues. Alternatively, I agree with this notion and my motives will be illuminated in the following paragraphs. Furthermore, I believe that there is a defensible basis for this argument. The proponents of this view discuss that there are many reasons behind their claims. Consequently sophisticated technology and language aptitudes denote a prominent consequence on society to insurmountable through the sociable and practical strategies whereas pessimistic drawbacks lead towards positivity. Moreover, one particularly salient example could be illustrated by the contemporary survey among the university of Toronto Canada. In addition to that researches have shown the estimated average percentage of people who have to use a foreign dialect going through the critical issue compared to the native speakers. On balance, I agree with this phenomenon. Undoubtedly, key points to justify this argument could be illustrated by a personal tangible example. To cut a long story short, the University of New York accounted for the annual percentage of issues and varieties of situations endured by the people who have to speak a foreign language in a relative nation and it denotes unexpectedly high value. To conclude, we should own up with the idea that there are more drawbacks and social issues that have been existing for a foreign speaker and those disadvantages cannot be multifold compared to the social and pragmatic compensations. Alternatively to left a shadow beyond a doubt, we should understand authentic perspectives, strategies and it can lead our lives toward prosperity.
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that due to the advancement of modern communication system relations among
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nations
has
been increased
markedly
.
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,
as a result
of that living in a
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nation
where
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have to
converse with a
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foreign
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language
has become a controversial
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issue
in the global village.
Moreover
,
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some
academicians claim that speaking a
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foreign
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language
in an exotic
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nation
can provoke crucial social hardships,
as well
as empirical
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issues
.
Alternatively
, I
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agree
with this notion and my motives will
be illuminated
in the following paragraphs.
Furthermore
, I believe that there is a defensible basis for this argument.

The proponents of this view discuss that there are
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many
reasons behind their claims.
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Consequently
sophisticated technology and
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language
aptitudes denote a prominent consequence on society to insurmountable through the sociable and practical strategies whereas pessimistic drawbacks lead towards positivity.
Moreover
, one
particularly
salient example could
be illustrated
by the contemporary survey among the university of Toronto Canada.
In addition
to that researches have shown the estimated average percentage of
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people
who
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have to
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use
a
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foreign
dialect going through the critical
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issue
compared to the native speakers.

On balance, I
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agree
with this phenomenon.
Undoubtedly
, key points to justify this argument could
be illustrated
by a personal tangible example. To
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cut
a long story short, the University of New York accounted for the annual percentage of
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issues
and varieties of situations endured by the
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people
who
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have to
speak a
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foreign
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language
in a relative
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nation
and it denotes
unexpectedly
high value.

To conclude
, we should
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own
up with the
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idea
that there are more drawbacks and social
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issues
that have been existing for a
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foreign
speaker and those disadvantages cannot be
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multifold
compared to the social and pragmatic compensations.
Alternatively
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
a shadow beyond a doubt, we should understand authentic perspectives, strategies and it can lead our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
toward prosperity.
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
5.5
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