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Some people belive that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people belive that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. 33oJ
Some schools of thoughts, feel that, they should not pay tax to the government and keep all the salary that they get. I firmly disagree with this given notion and this essay will discuss the related aspects in detail. To begin with, there are several reasons why should individual ought to pay tax to the administrations. Firstly, it helps government in order to develope the various sectors and provide facilities to the citizens. Government also albe to help financialy to the needy people of that particular area, if tax from the other people received. For example, In India council currently running one initiative in which they provides fix amount of wheat, sugar and a kind of basic things to survive to the people who falls in below poverty line. So that, people can stay fit and nurture their abilities to do more work. Seconly, good amount of tax also encourage administrations to establish new plants, making new roads and bridges, constructing new embarkments, and so on, hence, it generates plethora of job opportunities in nearby area. So, indirectly, joblessness level went down and financial conditions of any nation improve significanlty. Moreover, it also motivates goverments to invest more money in foreign countries or give them loans, as a result, they able to earn plenty amount of foreign exchanges. Eventually, it helps any nation to build-up healthy economy as thses kinds of aspects are directly linked with economy. However, because of number of reasons few groups of people having contradicting viewe like it is not mandetory to pay the tax to the respective central government. The tax structure is not appropriate for all the workers in many nations, as a repercussion, citizens of that nations believe that it is worthless to pay tax to such a government. Additionally, one of the prime reason of not paying tax is corruption. For example, one survey revelaed that, In developing nations 30% of the tax amount which are paid by the individuals are corrputed by higher authorities rather than use it in country's progress. In conclusion, personally, I think that, everyone should have to pay tax according to their income level, so that, administration can use it in a constuctive ways in order to develop prestigious financial statistics of country. But still I believe that, they ought to make necessary amendments in current tax paying format and take strict steps towards the people who breches the rules.
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to the
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and
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keep
all the salary that they
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. I
firmly
disagree with this
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notion and this essay will discuss the related aspects in detail.

To
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begin
with, there are several reasons why should individual ought to
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pay
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tax
to the administrations.
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, it
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helps
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government
in order to
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develope
the various sectors and provide facilities to the citizens.
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also
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financialy
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people
of that particular area, if
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from the other
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people
received.
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currently
running one initiative in which they
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provides
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of wheat, sugar and a kind of basic things to survive to the
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falls
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can stay fit and nurture their abilities to do more work.
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,
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good
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of
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also
encourage administrations to establish new plants, making new roads and bridges, constructing new
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embarkments
, and
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on,
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, it generates plethora of job opportunities in nearby area.
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,
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, joblessness level went down and financial conditions of any
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improve
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significanlty
.
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, it
also
motivates
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goverments
to invest more money in foreign countries or give them loans,
as a result
,
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they
able to earn
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plenty
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amount
of foreign exchanges.
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, it
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helps
any
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to build-up healthy economy as
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thses
kinds of aspects are
directly
linked with economy.

However
,
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of number of reasons few groups of
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having contradicting
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viewe
like it is not
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mandetory
to
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the
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to the respective central
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government
. The
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tax
structure is not appropriate for all the workers in
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many
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nations
, as a repercussion, citizens of that
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nations
believe that it is worthless to
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pay
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tax
to such a
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government
.
Additionally
, one of the prime reason of not paying
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is corruption.
For example
, one survey
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revelaed
that, In developing
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nations
30% of the
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tax
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amount
which
are paid
by the individuals are
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corrputed
by higher authorities
rather
than
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use
it in country's progress.

In conclusion
,
personally
, I
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that, everyone should
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pay
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tax
according to their income level,
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so
that, administration can
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use
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constuctive
ways in order to develop prestigious financial statistics of country.
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still
I believe that, they ought to
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make
necessary amendments in
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current
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tax
paying format and take strict steps towards the
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people
who
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breches
the
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IELTS essay Some people belive that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
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