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in the world of internet, people write review of product. do you think this is positive or negative development

in the world of internet, people write review of product. do you think this is positive or negative development 1JYW
Internet is regarded as boon to mankind. The discussion whether product assessment is an infallible tool to educate customers or is useless is an argumentative one. In this essay, I will examine both pros and cons of internet reviews namely closer relation with customer and falsified evidence respectively. To embark with, provided that mankind are in pop-culture era, searching intended information is just a second away, and all credit goes to internet! Primarily, trend of reviews where one can openly present his impressions regarding purchased product is helpful to both manufacturer and purchaser. Moreover, it is a principal factor to build an ethical relationship with both the party. For instance, with the assist of provided reviews, sellers can improve their quality or what they lack behind according to customer hence a healthy link is formed. As a result, others new people are more likely to purchase from following company since they are giving their best to improve instead of contending buyers. In general, reviewing products has been a valuable insight that helps firm to progress. On other hand, majority of people reject this notion due to the fact that there exists several drawbacks. One of the disadvantages is lack of negative marking could possibly affect a customer’s opinion and decision to make a purchase. Recent research of US shows 68% people trust reviews if they include of positive and negative reviews. Apart from this, competitors are seeking for an opportunity to manipulate customers. To give clear example this culture leads them to create some falsified reviews with illegal account and it could lead to malicious or damaging information being posted. In conclusion, it is a double-edged sword, has both positive and negative side. Nevertheless, concerned authorities must follow-up the reviews in weekly basis to eradicate hired comments.
Internet
is regarded
as boon to mankind. The discussion whether product assessment is an infallible tool to educate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customers
or is useless is an argumentative one. In this essay, I will examine both pros and cons of internet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reviews
namely
closer relation with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
and falsified evidence
respectively
.

To embark with, provided that mankind are in pop-culture era, searching intended information is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a second away, and all credit goes to internet!
Primarily
, trend of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reviews
where one can
openly
present his impressions regarding
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
product is helpful to both manufacturer and purchaser.
Moreover
, it is a principal factor to build an ethical relationship with both the party.
For instance
, with the assist of provided
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reviews
, sellers can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their quality or what they lack behind according to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
hence
a healthy link
is formed
.
As a result
, others new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are more likely to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
from following
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company
since they are giving their best to
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improve
instead
of contending buyers.
In general
, reviewing products has been a valuable insight that
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helps
firm to progress.

On other hand,
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majority of
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people
reject this notion due to the fact that there exists several drawbacks. One of the disadvantages is lack of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
marking could
possibly
affect a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer’s
opinion and decision to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
. Recent research of US
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shows
68%
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people
trust
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reviews
if they include of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reviews
. Apart from this, competitors are seeking for an opportunity to manipulate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customers
. To give
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
example this culture leads them to create
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
falsified
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reviews
with illegal account and it could lead to malicious or damaging information
being posted
.

In conclusion
, it is a double-edged sword, has both
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
side.
Nevertheless
, concerned authorities
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
follow-up the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reviews
in weekly basis to eradicate hired comments.
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IELTS essay in the world of internet, people write review of product. do you think this is positive or negative development

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
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