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Many government think that economic progress is the most important goal some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country

Many government think that economic progress is the most important goal some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country y5rl
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as the increase in the inflation adjusted market value of the course and service produced by an
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economic
over the time it is a
highly
debatable issue whether the
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governments
am that
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economic
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progress
is most
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economic
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nations are focusing their
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economic
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growth
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because
they are making their nation powerful as compared to the world currents collect the taxes from the public and
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in the going mark United States military program is
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in the world
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their
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in which all country going to up in my opinion
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IELTS essay Many government think that economic progress is the most important goal some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
286 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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