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NOWADAYS MORE AND MORE OLDER PEOPLE WHO ARE LOOKING FOR WORK HAVE TO COMPETE WITH YOUNGER PEOPLE FOR THE SAME JOBS.WHAT ARE THE PROBLEMS AND SOLUTION TO THIS ISSUE.

NOWADAYS MORE AND MORE OLDER PEOPLE WHO ARE LOOKING FOR WORK HAVE TO COMPETE WITH YOUNGER PEOPLE FOR THE SAME JOBS. WHAT ARE THE PROBLEMS AND SOLUTION TO THIS ISSUE. W0rk

It is an irrefutable fact that, in this era the elder people are really striving hard to get into a job, compared to their younger counterparts. While, this create a lot of problems, there are certain steps that could be done to solve this issue. The main difficulty that the elder people face to get a job is because, of their lack of knowledge and experience in the current and newer technologies. However, at the same time younger people are much updated. Even though, elder people have skills in dealing with the clients or customers compared to younger people, despite considering this

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