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NOWADAYS MORE AND MORE OLDER PEOPLE WHO ARE LOOKING FOR WORK HAVE TO COMPETE WITH YOUNGER PEOPLE FOR THE SAME JOBS.WHAT ARE THE PROBLEMS AND SOLUTION TO THIS ISSUE.

NOWADAYS MORE AND MORE OLDER PEOPLE WHO ARE LOOKING FOR WORK HAVE TO COMPETE WITH YOUNGER PEOPLE FOR THE SAME JOBS. WHAT ARE THE PROBLEMS AND SOLUTION TO THIS ISSUE. W0rk
It is an irrefutable fact that, in this era the elder people are really striving hard to get into a job, compared to their younger counterparts. While, this create a lot of problems, there are certain steps that could be done to solve this issue. The main difficulty that the elder people face to get a job is because, of their lack of knowledge and experience in the current and newer technologies. However, at the same time younger people are much updated. Even though, elder people have skills in dealing with the clients or customers compared to younger people, despite considering this
It is an irrefutable fact that, in this era the elder
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into a job, compared to their younger counterparts. While,
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a lot of
problems, there are certain steps that could
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to solve this issue. The main difficulty that the elder
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people
face to
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get
a job is
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because
, of their lack of knowledge and experience in the
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current
and newer technologies.
However
, at the same time younger
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people
are much updated.
Even though
, elder
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people
have
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skills
in dealing with the clients or customers compared to younger
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IELTS essay NOWADAYS MORE AND MORE OLDER PEOPLE WHO ARE LOOKING FOR WORK HAVE TO COMPETE WITH YOUNGER PEOPLE FOR THE SAME JOBS. WHAT ARE THE PROBLEMS AND SOLUTION TO THIS ISSUE.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
101 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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