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Some people belive that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.

Some people belive that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Xnb5w
Every country have their own unique cultural value whith represent the country. One of the thing that makes a country stand out from the rest is that the goverment invests money in the construction school an hospital. Improving school and hospital are good choice to invest money. First and foremost, improving hospitals can guarantee social welfare, which helps to maintain social and hospital stability and pave the way for developing economy. Similarly, if citixens do not have enough health care, the main labors can not work and serve their country. It makes the mentioning is that investment in education is the key to civilzed society. FOr example, if schools provide qualifiedd education it will increase knowledge and literacy rate. Futhermore citizens are able to find well - paying jobs to developing the economy and crime rate decrease. In conclusion, I think that the nation's culture are a reflection of the country's prosperity was determined by the goverment's budgetary investment in the health care anf education of people, detail is hospitals and schools.
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unique cultural value
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represent the
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country
. One of the thing that
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a
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country
stand out from the rest is that the
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goverment
invests money in the construction
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school
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an
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hospital
. Improving
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school
and
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hospital
are
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good
choice to invest money.
First
and foremost, improving
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hospitals
can guarantee social welfare, which
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helps
to maintain social and
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hospital
stability and pave the way for developing economy.
Similarly
, if
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citixens
do not have
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enough
health care, the main labors can not work and serve their
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country
. It
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makes
the mentioning is that investment in education is the key to
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civilzed
society.
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FOr
example, if
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schools
provide
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qualifiedd
education it will increase knowledge and literacy rate.
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Futhermore
citizens are able to find well
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paying jobs to developing the economy and crime rate decrease.
In conclusion
, I
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think
that the nation's culture are a reflection of the country's prosperity
was determined
by the
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goverment
's budgetary investment in the health care
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anf
education of
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people
, detail is
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hospitals
and
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schools
.
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IELTS essay Some people belive that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
172 words
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