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Some people belive that a small class with a few students

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Some people belive that a small class with a few students has a positive role to play in the education because it has benefit such as each student get noticed and opportunities to participate. Class has few students, student get attention from the teacher that make teacher can. get to know an individuals, improve their weakness anh ehance their strenghths. Not only do. the. student learn more in small class, but also learn faster. In learning environments with a limited number of students, students have opportunity to participate. They share their opinions and answer questions and have more chances to speak up in their class. They can apply the knowledge they’ve acquired as they participate in discussions. There is more time for them to share their own ideas, express their feeling. Studying in. the smaller class bring student some of benifit
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IELTS essay Some people belive that a small class with a few students

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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