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some people belive steam is important

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We would like to share a few details about our previous projects- "Bookmobile Winter Camp" and "Nasa Room in Prezeti" while we are at the final stage.  As we discussed, due to the Covid pandemic and regulations, unfortunately, we were not able to hold some activities and decided to change some priorities. These changes gave a good possibility to develop the long-term training courses separately for teachers and IDP students related to the basics of STEAM education and make a future platform to share the specific practical knowledge among students or teachers. The course is elaborated by the students from the San Diego State University and oriented accurately for the Bookmobile audience. The purpose of this idea is to encourage and guarantee adequate utilization of the NASA classroom. Under the project of Nasa room, we will also buy an advanced computer to implement a programming course with our QSI school volunteers. Also for tomorrow, we will announce an essay competition under the project of "Winter Camp" to promote peace and peacebuilding associated subjects.
We would like to share a few
details
about our previous projects-
"
Bookmobile Winter Camp
"
and
"
Nasa
 Room in
Prezeti
"
while we are at the final stage.  As we discussed, due to the
Covid
pandemic and regulations, unfortunately, we were not able to hold
some
activities and decided to
change
some
priorities.

These
changes
gave a
good
possibility to develop the long-term training courses
separately
for teachers and IDP students related to the basics of STEAM education and
make
a future platform to share the specific practical knowledge among students or teachers. The course
is elaborated
by the students from the San Diego State University and oriented
accurately
for the Bookmobile audience. The purpose of this
idea
is to encourage and guarantee adequate utilization of the NASA classroom.

Under the project of
Nasa
room, we will
also
buy
an advanced computer to implement a programming course with our
QSI
school volunteers.

Also
for tomorrow, we will announce an essay competition under the project of
"
Winter Camp
"
to promote peace and
peacebuilding
associated subjects.
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IELTS essay some people belive steam is important

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
167 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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