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Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

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to lid a safe life in a
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country
. The defense system, running of jails and, the law enforcement agencies
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by the money of taxpayers. If these agencies shut down then the
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country
will face chaos. The crime rate will
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as a result
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IELTS essay Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
322 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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