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Some people believe that you should be fined if you do not recycle.  To what extent you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that you should be fined if you do not recycle. 2bKpA
In some countries people are fined if they do not recycle. I agree strongly with this idea and think all countries should adopt this policy. Even though it would be difficult to manage, it would encourage people to take recycling more seriously. Choosing not to recycle simply because you do not have the time is just not a good enough excuse when you consider the impact waste has on the environment. Recycling means used materials are converted into new products, reducing the need to consume precious natural resources. It is not only recycling which helps protect the environment - there are also many other things that can be done, for example, saving energy or water when you are at home. This can be done by switching off lights or turning off the taps when not in use. People need to educate themselves about environmental issues and then take action. Before a fine can be issued, however, the government has to provide clear guidelines about what can be recycled and where it can be recycled. Governments could do more to help environmental issues in general. For example, the government could fine companies that do nothing to help with environmental issues and reward those that do. In conclusion, due to over-buying and not recycling enough, we are destroying our planet and experiencing problems such as global warming and natural disasters. Consequently, fining people for not recycling is the least we can do. The fine should be at least as much as a parking or speeding fine.
In
some
countries
people
are fined
if they do not recycle. I
agree
strongly
with this
idea
and
think
all countries should adopt this policy.
Even though
it would be difficult to manage, it would encourage
people
to take
recycling
more
seriously
.

Choosing not to recycle
simply
because
you do not have the time is
just
not a
good
enough
excuse when you consider the impact waste has on the environment.
Recycling
means
used
materials
are converted
into new products, reducing the need to consume precious natural resources.

It is not
only
recycling
which
helps
protect the environment
-
there are
also
many
other things that can
be done
,
for example
, saving energy or water when you are at home. This can
be done
by switching off lights or turning off the taps when not in
use
.
People
need to educate themselves about environmental issues and then take action.

Before
a
fine
can
be issued
,
however
, the
government
has to
provide
clear
guidelines about what can
be recycled
and where it can
be recycled
.
Governments
could do more to
help
environmental issues
in general
.
For example
, the
government
could
fine
companies
that do nothing to
help
with environmental issues and reward those that do.

In conclusion
, due to over-buying and not
recycling
enough
, we are destroying our planet and experiencing problems such as global warming and natural disasters.
Consequently
, fining
people
for not
recycling
is the least we can do. The
fine
should be at least as much as a parking or speeding
fine
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that you should be fined if you do not recycle.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
254 words
6.5
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