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Some people believe that whatch films in the cinema better And impressive than watch home on the stream service. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Introduction

Some people believe that whatch films in the cinema better And impressive than watch home on the stream service. Introduction M1aL
It is argued that watch films in the cinemas more impressive and pleasant. This essay disagrees with that suggestion completely because nowadays in the pandemic period people not have a possibility to goes the cinema. Nowadays cinemas become a one of the important part of the people. Watching films give people relax and forget for the moment tired weekdays and enter the another world. I partly agree with this statement that cinema better because thanks to this establishment we enjoying every moment which people spend over there. Thanks to high-quality equipment such as dynamic sound, advanced technologies we feeling that situate on this film's world. For example, when beginning horror scene and become the silence people hearing every sound around themselves, hearing that someone hiding in the dark wait until it scream and kill someone. It is really unique feeling. However, watching movie home take people no less pleasant and impressive emotions than cinema. This is have a several reasons. This essay disagrees with this statement because watching movie on the stream service more comfortable and useful for people. They do not wait release a movie in the digital that they want see, do not crowd In the turn if that film is greatest. At the home it is all another. For example stream service take a possibility to watch in the digital, biggest choice beginning with the documentary movie and culminating Hollywood's action movie. We are in some moment can tap pause leave the room make a dinner and come again tap the play and enjoy the watch. In conclusion, I want to say that sometimes better visit cinema. But this essay disagrees with this statement because watch at home more comfortable and simple to use than come to kino theatr.
It
is argued
that
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watch
films in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cinemas
more impressive and pleasant. This essay disagrees with that suggestion completely
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because
nowadays in the pandemic period
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people
not have a possibility to goes the cinema.

Nowadays
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cinemas
become a one of the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
part of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. Watching films give
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
relax and forget for the moment tired weekdays and enter the another world. I partly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this statement that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cinema
better
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
thanks to this establishment
Did you mean "we're enjoying", "we are enjoying", or "we were enjoying"?
we enjoying
every moment which
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
spend over there. Thanks to high-quality equipment such as dynamic sound, advanced technologies
Did you mean "we're feeling", "we are feeling", or "we were feeling"?
we feeling
that situate on this film's world.
For example
, when beginning horror scene and become the silence
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
hearing every sound around themselves, hearing that someone
With the word 'that' in a subjunctive clause, use the base form of a verb: "hide".
hiding
in the dark wait until it scream and kill someone. It is
Consider using "unique".
really unique
feeling.

However
, watching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
home take
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
no less pleasant and impressive emotions than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cinema
. This is
Consider using a past participle here: "had".
have
a several reasons.

This essay disagrees with this statement
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because
watching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
on the stream service more comfortable and useful for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. They do not wait release a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
in the digital that they want
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
, do not crowd In the turn if that film is greatest. At the home it is all another.
For example
stream service take a possibility to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
in the digital,
A determiner is probably missing here: "the biggest".
biggest
choice beginning with the documentary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
and culminating Hollywood's action
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
. We are in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
moment can tap pause
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leave
the room
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make
a dinner and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
again tap the play and enjoy the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
.

In conclusion
, I want to say that
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sometimes
better visit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cinema
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
this essay disagrees with this statement
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
at home more comfortable and simple to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
than
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to
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kino
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theatr
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that whatch films in the cinema better And impressive than watch home on the stream service. Introduction

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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