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In some countries disabled people face a lot of troubles to access public and private facilities what solutions do you have to have such people discuss?

In some countries disabled people face a lot of troubles to access public and private facilities what solutions do you have to have such people discuss? 8w3l
it is indeed true that for the last few decades government have been working hard to developed countries, but some authorities are far behind in providing facilities for specially challenged people because of that people with a disability have to suffer a lot while accessing any public or private amenities. This problem seems difficult but it can be kept away by few effective measurement which i will articulate into accompanying passages. It is heart wrenching to witness the disabled people being discriminated in some part of the world. A disabled people does not mean who is on the wheelchair but also others who are mentally challenged blind and with hearing and walking impairments. Oftentime they are discriminated by both government and fellow citizen. There are plethora of Suggestion to deal with this problem but on the top of that it is a government new team to provide all the basic and accommodation facilities to the physically challenged people at the same time the most and next the single floor or tools for builders to design a building which must be disabled friendly and include facilities like a physically challenged corridor special urinary washroom in malls are theatres and also include facilities like rams. This facility would definitely helpful for them. Moreover, the government must understand that faulty facilities make life difficult for all pathar hole on the road falta street light and absence of proper sign on road create a problem and it might also enjoyed the citizen including disabled people by solving this problem it can have a disabled people for the more government should give up for tax relation for those companies who employ a disable people and give a provisions like subsidies to buy assistive devices for physical challenge like a hearing impairment and wheelchair. To conclude country cannot develop until government should focus on all area by implementing blow and provide a basic necessity to people with a disability will shortly solve the problem in near future.
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true that for the last few
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developed countries
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some
authorities are far behind in providing facilities for
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challenged
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people
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of that
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people
with a disability
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have to
suffer a lot while accessing any public or private amenities. This
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problem
seems difficult
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but
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kept
away by few effective measurement which
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will articulate into accompanying passages. It is heart wrenching to witness the
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disabled
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people
being discriminated
in
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some
part of the world. A
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disabled
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people
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does
not mean who is on the wheelchair
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but
also
others who are mentally
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challenged
blind and with hearing and walking impairments.
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Oftentime
they
are discriminated
by both
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government
and fellow citizen. There are plethora of Suggestion to deal with this
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problem
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but
on the top of that it is a
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government
new team to provide all the basic and accommodation facilities to the
physically
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challenged
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people
at the same time the most and
next
the single floor or tools for builders to design a building which
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must
be
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disabled
friendly and include facilities like a
physically
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challenged
corridor special urinary washroom in malls are
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theatres
and
also
include facilities like rams. This facility would definitely helpful for them.

Moreover
, the
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government
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must
understand that faulty facilities
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make
life difficult for all
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pathar
hole on the road
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falta
street light and absence of proper
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sign
on road create a
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problem
and it might
also
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enjoyed
the citizen including
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disabled
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people
by solving this
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problem
it can have a
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disabled
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people
for the more
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government
should give up for tax relation for those
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companies
who employ
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a disable
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people
and give a provisions like subsidies to
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buy
assistive devices for physical challenge like a hearing impairment and wheelchair.

To conclude
country cannot develop until
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government
should focus on all area by implementing blow and provide a basic necessity to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
with a disability will shortly solve the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
in near future.
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IELTS essay In some countries disabled people face a lot of troubles to access public and private facilities what solutions do you have to have such people discuss?

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