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some people believe that we should take actions in protecting the environment. Some people say that we cannot do anything. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

some people believe that we should take actions in protecting the environment. Some people say that we cannot do anything. Discuss both views and give your own opinion kLBRW
The environment has become a major concern in modern life. We constantly face the issue of environmental problems which are becoming more serious nowadays. While some people say that we cannot do anything, I am still in favor of the argument that we should take actions in protecting the environment. On the one hand, there are some reasons why people think that we cannot do anything to protect the environment. The first reason is that there are some areas where each person’s efforts are in vain. For example, some factories release toxic gases into our air or dump dangerous materials in our rivers. Clearly, if we want to solve it individually, we cannot expect to prevent this from happening. Another major reason is that the rules that the government has introduced are not strict. For example, the government only encourages people not to use plastic bags, not completely prohibited, so people still use them quite a lot, especially in rural areas. This is very harmful to our environment. And to solve this issue, only the government can force. However, I subscribe to the view that we should take actions in protecting the environment. To begin with, if we change some small habits in our daily lives, we can eliminate the harmful causes to the environment. For example, we always can bring a recycling bag or paper bag while shopping so that usage of plastic bags will decrease. In addition, we must not throw garbage indiscriminately and throw trash bags into the river. Instead of, we should prepare bins in the house and plant more trees. Besides that, with nearby roads instead of riding motorcycles or driving cars, we can walk, bike or use public transport to reduce emissions to the environment. These will definitely help protect the environment. Thus, such actions from an individual could lead to a healthy environment. To conclude, while it is believed that there are two main reasons which we cannot do anything to protect the environment, I still hold a firm belief that we completely can take actions in protecting the environment.
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say that we cannot do anything, I am
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in favor of the argument that we should take actions in protecting the environment.

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why
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people
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think
that we cannot do anything to protect the
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environment
. The
first
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reason
is that there are
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some
areas where each person’s efforts are in vain.
For example
,
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some
factories release toxic gases into our air or dump
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dangerous
materials in our rivers.
Clearly
, if we want to solve it
individually
, we cannot
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expect
to
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prevent
this from happening. Another major
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reason
is that the
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rules
that the
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government
has introduced are not strict.
For example
, the
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government
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only
encourages
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use
plastic
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bags
, not completely prohibited,
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people
still
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use
them quite a lot,
especially
in rural areas. This is
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very
harmful to our
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environment
. And to solve this issue,
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only
the
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government
can force.

However
, I subscribe to the view that we should take actions in protecting the
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environment
. To
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begin
with, if we
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change
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some
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small
habits in our daily
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lives
, we can eliminate the harmful causes to the
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environment
.
For example
, we always can bring a recycling
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bag
or paper
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bag
while shopping
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so
that usage of plastic
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bags
will decrease.
In addition
, we
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must
not throw garbage
indiscriminately
and throw trash
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bags
into the river.
Instead
of, we should prepare bins in the
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house
and plant more trees.
Besides
that, with nearby roads
instead
of riding motorcycles or driving cars, we can walk, bike or
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use
public transport to
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reduce
emissions to the
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environment
. These will definitely
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help
protect the
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environment
.
Thus
, such actions from an individual could lead to a healthy environment.

To conclude
, while it
is believed
that there are two main
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reasons
which we cannot do anything to protect the
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environment
, I
still
hold a firm belief that we completely can take actions in protecting the
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environment
.
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IELTS essay some people believe that we should take actions in protecting the environment. Some people say that we cannot do anything. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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