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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life.

Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. bpdq
It is difficult to determine whether history can be useful to comprehend the human mind or not. It would be reasonable for some people to think that it is hard to apply the knowledge of history in modern times: the world is in constant development and so are people's mindsets. The problems humans had to go though in the past are completely different from nowadays problems; it is highly unlikely that some of the same events would occur again. For example, it is difficult to believe that a witch hunt or a crusade would happen again. On the other hand, the world would not be as it is now if it was not for its own history. I am a strong supporter of the idea that "people learn from their mistakes" and without studying history this approach would not be possible. In my opinion there is a substantial sensitivity regarding racial issues as a consequence of all the fights and disorders caused in the past. Reading some transcripts written by ancient Greeks can be really illuminating: their way of thinking was really modern, and they already had some up-to-date ideas such as democracy and equality. Studying the ancient roman culture shows how human beings at that time had the same exact flaws of people in any other time: everyone was, and still is, prone to procrastinate, subject to irrational decisions driven by the passion of love, amusement or rage. Nonetheless it can be observed that too much desire for success frequently leads to decay. In conclusion I am prone to think that the human population has a lot to learn from history. There might be different problems in every time age, but the ideas and the nature of men has been the same for centuries.
It is difficult to determine whether
history
can be useful to comprehend the
human
mind or not.

It would be reasonable for
some
people
to
think
that it is
hard
to apply the knowledge of
history
in modern
times
: the world is in constant development and
so
are
people
's mindsets.

The problems
humans
had to go
though
in the past are completely
different
from nowadays problems; it is
highly
unlikely that
some of the
same
events
would occur again.
For example
, it is difficult to believe that a witch hunt or a crusade would happen again.

On the other hand
, the world would not be as it is
now
if it was not for its
own
history
. I am a strong supporter of the
idea
that
"
people
learn from their mistakes
"
and without studying
history
this approach would not be possible. In my opinion there is a substantial sensitivity regarding racial issues as a consequence of all the fights and disorders caused in the past. Reading
some
transcripts written by ancient Greeks can be
really
illuminating: their way of thinking was
really
modern, and they already had
some
up-to-date
ideas
such as democracy and equality. Studying the ancient roman culture
shows
how
human
beings at that
time
had the same exact flaws of
people
in any other
time
: everyone was, and
still
is, prone to procrastinate, subject to irrational decisions driven by the passion of
love
, amusement or rage.
Nonetheless
it can
be observed
that too much desire for success
frequently
leads to decay.

In
conclusion I
am prone to
think
that the
human
population has a lot to learn from
history
. There might be
different
problems in every
time
age,
but
the
ideas
and the nature of
men
has been the same for centuries.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
295 words
6.0
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